Revenge Story Idea's

[LordRunes]

I have personally been working on a revenge story for several months. So far the main character and her partner have entered a camp to train. Now I am stuck on the transition from camp back to regular life and the act of revenge.

No I do not plan on posting this one here to graphic with blood rape and pain.

Just a bad case of writers block making it hard to see where the transition should be.

LR

 

[snooper]

... Now I am stuck on the transition from camp back to regular life ...

Just get in the car/train/aircraft and go. No real transition sounds necessary to me. A simple scene change as:

Finally it was over. The hell of the training camp had ended and they had both passed the last test.

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Going in to the office the next morning was more difficult than he had expected. Seeing [the intended victim] and knowing he could now take his revenge made him impatient, but he knew that to avoid punishment he would have to wait and plan, and he couldn't do it alone.