Revenge is a Dish Best Served HOT...

WickedEyes

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The bitch deseved it.

Oh, yes, I was going to show her. Yes - I'm going to make her life so good, so full of excitment, fullfillment, stability - and best of all, the best fucking she's had in a long time.

And then I'm going to pull the fuckin' rug right out under her.

It'll teach her that breaking up with me was the worst idea she ever had. Oh, yes.

***

"Tom?" I answered my cell. Traffic was terrible, and the sun was pounding down hard. Being in a convertable had its advantages, but this was not one of them.

"Yeah... you found her, huh? Great... right where I knew she'd be. She hasn't changed at all."

I honked the horn. This was going to piss me off - stupid paki taxi driver...

"She did, huh? No shit - you just started talking with her and got her to agree to go out on a date with you? Well, what do you know. She's still a fuckin' slut."

Finally the traffic started to move and before I knew it I was out of the direct sunlight. Good, at least one thing was going right. Well, counting the phone call, two.

"Its for tomorrow night? Good. What? No, we talked over this - you're going to treat her like a princess. She likes that. Get her something nice. A red rose for starters. And, um... no, no - dude, that's too much for the first date. Trust me. Get her the rose and some M&M's."

I turned the corner and sped up. It was hard to pay attention, I was so intent on the conversation. I was already trying to figure out where I'd be, watching this shit when it went on.

"Yes, some M&M's... Tom, man. Yes, M&M's - look, who knows the bitch more, you or me? That's right - I went out with that whore for 3 and a half years before she dumped me. I know how she ticks. Hell, I know how she fucks. And I'm going to teach you exactly what she likes."

I came to a stop. Finally, home sweet f'n home.

"Yeah, man... She likes it when you tickle her pussy with your dick. Yeah... wait, what the fuck you asking that for now? You ain't going to fuck her for a bit, yet. First you gotta romance her, man. Trust me. It's going to be fun. Yeah, yeah, don't worry. You'll be bending her over and fuckin' her in no time. Yeah, yeah, peace out."

I hung up, snapping my cell shut. I looked up and frowned. I quickly covered my car... it looked like rain was in the forcast.

***

I need several players. I need a female who is VERY good at details and RPing and a male to play Tom who is hopefully equally as good. If other people want to play bit-parts like a waiter at the restaraunt, maybe a friend of Tom's, or of the female character (who I will name later), please we can add as the story evolves.
 
Would you like me to take Tom's role? Of course "he'll" need your coaching to 'help out' with the conquest and your revenge, but hey what are buddies for if not to help one another.
 
*huggs*

Thanks for the PMs WickedEyes!

Best of luck with this story ... I'll be reading along!

DM x
:rose:
 
Tina Worthington felt as though she was finally going to be able to live up to her name Worth, or Worthy was how she felt that night as she preened in front of the mirror. It had been a while since she had been on a date and she felt damn good-both because she was going out with a hunky guy and the fact she looked like a million bucks.

She was wearing a simple black coctail dress, simple except for the fact it was cut low in the front with a plunging back and only came to mid thigh. On anyone else it would have looked slutty, but she managed to pull it off. Perhaps the fact that she was draping this outfit over a 5'8 busty frame helped, or the fact her firey red hair was piled in such an enticing way on top of her head. Whatever it was, it made her look like she should be at a fashion show rather than going out, and therefore she was well pleased.

She was wearing black stockings and a garter under her dress, shimmery ones that drew attention to her fantastic legs. Her breasts were perky enough that she had no worries about not being able to wear a bra, though the fact her nipples had a tendancy to get hard at the least provacation was a minor cause for concern. In fact they were hard right now, just from the anticipation of her upcoming date, and she frowned at them nervously. Shrugging and hoping they either wouldnt be noticed or they would go down on their own, she reached for her high heeled strappy shoes and sat on her bed to put them on.

When she was finished, she applied a light amount of makeup, a little blush, some eye shadow and lipstick, then grabbed her purse and went to the living room. She glanced at the clock-10 minutes ahead of schedule, not to bad. Unlike many women, she prided herself on her punctuality in all things, especially dates. She had a small sip of the water that sat on the table beside her, to wet lips that were a little dry from apprehension. This was her first date with this guy, she wanted it to be perfect.
 
OOC:

Waiting for Wicked Eyes to let me know if I'm to take Tom's role or not so I may post basic character info and arrive puncutually with a rose and big bag of M&M's in hand. *s
 
I want to give the not but I heard that you are heavy into bondage stories, etc.

I do want some of that, but this is in no way centered around, say, tying this girl down to the bed with whips and violating her with a dildo repeatedly =P

Now, I'm not saying that it won't happen, you don't know exactly the direction some of these stories go - but I wanted to see if you're fine with a story that might not lead that way. Though if the boyfriend has anything to do with it, she's going to certainly get fucked up lol
 
No problem Wicked Eyes and yes most of the stories, or at least many of them *s*, revolve around and explore the BDSM Lifestyle in one way or another.

However, if you'd like to look at "A New Contract" for instance:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=153662

I think that you'll see I do write in stories that don't involve the Lifestyle.

As Tom is being used as the 'instrument of revenge' he'll be taking his cues from you as to what's to happen to her.

Oh, one thought just occured to me, what happens if they actually become 'involved'? Have you thought about that and how you'll handle it? Just curious because it doesn't have to happen of course just could be a "twist" to think about.

I'll be watching for your reply and do understand your concern, but I let those I write with set the tone of the story we're in beforehand, as you're doing now. *s
PP
 
"Yeah, yeah, yeah... I understand."

I stood behind the glass on my balcony, staring out. Gotta love neighbors; This chick stood in her bedroom, staring at herself in the mirror. Having a pair of binoculars helped.

"Hrm?" I was balancing the spying with talking on my cell phone. "Right. Tonight's the 'big night' - that slut's going to be so excited with a 'great guy' like you, man." I laughed.

Nice... she had on a black bra. Very tight. And her titties were pushing up against the material.

"Whoah, man..." I calmed my friend down. "Dude, you are a great guy... I just was being sarcastic... that bitch is going to be in for one hell of a shock."

The chick across from me disappeared for a moment but she appeared again with a simple cocktail dress. She twirled around in it.

"Cunt."

I paused.

"What? No, I'm not calling you a cunt... ah, forget it. It's time hit the restaraunt."

I smiled as the girl turned off her lights and left her apartment. It pays to know where to move.
 
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