Revenge Can Be So Sweet

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The summer had been very eventful for Ally Simpson. After years of being ignored by the opposite sex, she decided that her senior year at Manchester Prep was going to be different. Over the summer, she had completely transformed from the nerdy little girl into a gorgeous young woman. Everything about her was flawless....her body, her skin, her hair....everything. Her confidence was sent through the roof when she lost her virginity over the summer. After that, she could have any guy that she wanted and she had every intention of doing just that. No one would recognize her when she returned to school in the fall and it was her chance to start over. To completely relinquish her nerdy ways and to blossom as she took over the school.

She was determined....and nothing was going to stop her.

It was move- in day and the campus was packed with students moving back into their dormitories. There were limos, sports cars, and moving trucks everywhere. Most students were standing around as the movers moved their things into their room. As usual, the cliques were set from the very first day. You had your normal cliques like the jocks, the nerds, the goths, etc., but then you had "The Elite". They practically ruled the school and if you wanted any status in this school, you had to conquer them. They had ridiculed Ally since they were young and she wanted to show them.

Ally looked out of the tinted window of her limo as her driver pulled up to the front of the school. She had to admit she was a little nervous as she spotted "The Elite" in their normal spot, sitting next to the fountain. She took a look into her compact mirror, fixing her perfectly highlighted blonde hair and said, "Ok, Ally, time for some attitude." She put her mirror away as her driver came to open the door.

She stepped out of the limo, revealing her perfectly bronzed, long legs to anyone who was looking. She adjusted her school uniform that was modified to her liking, making the skirt much shorter to show off her legs and ass. As she looked up from adjusting her skirt, she noticed that all eyes were on her, even "The Elite" whose male members seemed to very interested. She gave a smile and wink in their direction before slipping on her sunglasses, passing right by them and into the dormitory. She couldn't seem as though she was eager for their attention. Make them come to her.

She arrived at her room which overlooked the front of the dorms where the cliques were gathered. She looked down at "The Elite", plotting her next move. She spotted Ryan Winston. He always seemed to be the leader. He was perfect in every way and he knew it. She knew that he would have to be the one she would need to gain the attention of and judging by the look he gave her when she arrived, it wouldn't be too hard.



OOC: What I'm thinking is that I want it to start out as a revenge thing, but to turn into a romance thing. She wants to conquer Ryan who turns out to not as much of an ass as she expected. So I need Ryan, members of the Elite, and other students. Perhaps other Elite men wanting her attention and maybe even some girls....or some jealous Elite girls. Whatever is fine with me. I want my Ryan character to PM me with a profile before you post. Thanks!

Name: Ally Simpson
Age: 18
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Crystal Blue
Height: 5'6"
Body: toned body, tanned skin, long legs, and perfect ass.
 
Ryan Winston
18
Brown Hair
Hazel Eyes
6'4"
200 pounds
Fit

Ryan was the so called leader of what was known around Campus as the Elite. Ryan knew Ally and while he found it rough to pick on her, he knew that since the rest of the group hated her just because she looked different from them, he had to pick on her as well, since he was named the leader of the group.

It wasn't his favorite part of his life, sometimes he just wished for it to go away, but it brought him attention, which he needed. He was the type of person who needed people around him giving him attention or else he would go crazy. He appeared to be an ass because that is what the rest of the Elite wanted to see him be, but if you broke him away from the group he could be nice and even caring.

Ryan saw Ally walking by, and couldn't bring himself to say anything mean to her, she was just too beautiful today, she looked so different now, she was so beautiful much different from the last time he saw her. She was a perfect 10 now compared to what she was, he watched her go inside the Dorm and just stared, as the females of the group started to bug him afterwards for not saying anything, but there was nothing he could say to someone who looked like that.
 
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Everyone was speechless as she walked through the halls of the dormitory. No one could even muster a hello. The boys' jaws hit the floor as she passed by them when it was time for opening assembly.

Everyone was piling into the auditorium as Ally hung back to make more of an entrance. She watched as all of "The Elite" passed her, giving her the once over as they talked on their cellphone although they were prohibited. Ally just leaned against the doorway and looked passed them, not giving them the satisfaction of a glance.

After everyone had settled into the auditorium, Ally took a deep breath and pushed both of the doors to the auditorium open, causing a loud noise that made everyone look. All those eyes were exactly what she had counted on as she strolled into the room with her sunglasses on. Everyone watched her as she walked confidently down the aisle and sat down in the section usually reserved for just "The Elite". She noticed "The Elite" girls giving her catty looks and she slid her sunglasses down her nose a bit to look at them, blew them an air kiss, repositioned her sunglasses, and went back to ignoring them.

She could hear all the whispers as she sat there, waiting for the assembly to start. "The Elite" were busy plotting their next line of attack after they closed their gaping mouths. They looked to their leader for advice.

Everyone was still watching her out of the corners of their eyes through the assembly. The Headmaster droned on and on about the "do's" and "don't". None of which "The Elite" abided by.

As the school stood to sing their alma mater (sp?) at the closing of the assembly, Ally walked out, making an exit similar to her entrance.

She figured she had everyone's undivided attention now. Perfect.
 
Ryan looked as Ally left the room, looking back at the rest of the Elite a couple of minutes after Ally left the room. Oh god how much she changed, he couldn't believe by how much she changed, all the guys were basically running after her as she left, and he couldn't blame them one bit. Ryan had to try hard not to follow them and chance after her himself, how he would want a chance to just go out with her,

The rest of the Elite, well at least the few that were left, half the guys seemed to run after Ally even though it meant immediatly banning from The Elite, she was still on the do not associate with list, and Ryan knew the Girls would never let him remove him remove her from the list, if they did he would be shocked especially now that she was beautiful and a threat to take the guys away from them, they were sluts for the most part after all.

Ryan turned to them. "Alright guys we need to try to upstage Ally, she seems to think that she runs the place now and can do what she wants. Girls, I think you know what to do, But for now she remains on the don't associate with list, until I say otherwise." He got up and started to leave, the rest of the group in tow, until he got to his first class, he looked around and saw who was in his class, hoping Ally was, she would be nice to look at every day.
 
Ally had survived her first assembly unharmed, but she knew it was only as matter of time before "The Elite" fight back. She wasn't too worried about it though. She could handle anything they threw at her.

It was time for her first class of the day, but she remained in her dorm room a little while longer since fashionably late entrances were becoming her specialty. She sat at her vanity and looked in the mirror. She didn't look anything like she used to. She put her old glasses on for a moment and looked at herself. She was happy that she changed, but for a moment she missed the old Ally. She rolled her eyes and tossed the glasses in the garbage.

If she was going to take over, she needed to be all in. No doubts. When she heard the bustling of the hallway die down, she left for her first class.

She heard the tardy bell ring as she walked down the empty hallway to her Biology class. She arrived at the room and stood outside the door for a moment. She had always been really good in science. It came easily to her and it was another reason why she used to be a dork. She liked science, but not anymore. You can't like school if you want to rule this school.

Ally pushed the door open and strolled into the room, settling in on a lab stool in the back of the room, crossing her legs and giving the ogling guys a good look at her long legs.

The teacher remarked, "How nice of you to join us, Miss Simpson."

Ally just shrugged and said, "Whoops."

The teacher ignored the comment and started class.
 
Rick had to get through class without seeing Ally, she wasn't in this class, unfourntely, it was a pity it would be a real lovely sight to see her each and every day, not like it mattered, knowing how she was acting now, he would be seeing a lot of her. After the class was over, he saw Sara the head of the Females in the Elite, and also the biggest slut in the group, enjoying the company of Rick a few times, but also most of the girls. He told her to get the girls to start bugging Ally.

He headed to his next class, knowing lunch was going to be coming soon, and he was going to need to sit with the Elite, after classes was over for the day he was going to try to get some time by himself away from the rest of the Elite and try to talk to Ally, he wanted to get to know her, and see if she became a bitch with this transformation, or if she was that nice girl he though she was, considering how easily she cried when the Girls of the Elite picked on her to begin with.
 
It was lunchtime now and still no sign of foul play from "The Elite" yet. Of course there was still plenty of time and the lunch room was the perfect opportunity. This is where they used to have their fun when Ally was a helpless nerd, but it was different now and she wasn't about to be their victim.

Ally had gotten used to everyone watching her when she entered a room so it was no surprise when she entered the cafeteria and everyone's head turned. She walked through the lunch line as any other student would do. She reached the end of the line and noticed Sara and her posse of bitches approaching her.

She smiled a fake smile and said, "Sara....Can I help you with something?" The Elite were so predictable. Sara was going to try and flip Ally's tray on her just like she had done many times before.

Just as Sara rolled her eyes and reached for Ally's tray, Ally turned the table and flipped the tray onto Sara, sending spaghetti all over her and her posse. The tray fell to the ground and Ally moved closer to the surprised Sara, taking a hand and smearing the spaghetti on Sara's white blouse more.

Ally smiled and said, "Next time you want to try and embarass me, I suggest you come up with something new. It's been a pleasure as always, Sara."

Ally walked confidently over to The Elite's table and took Ryan's napkin off of his tray, wiping her hands clean. She plopped it back on his tray and winked at him before walking out of the cafeteria.

She let out a sigh of achievement once she was out of the cafeteria. "That felt really good.", she whispered to herself.
 
Ryan couldn't help but smile a little when the tables turned on Sara, she was a bitch, and she had been doing that trick for about 3 years now, it was getting real old. He liked this new Ally, not that he ever hated the old one, this one just had a great big amount of Sex appeal attached to herself. He smiled inwardly as Sara and the other bitches were getting into a big argument about what just happened, the other male members of the Elite were showing up now, and wondered what was going on.

Ryan smiled more when Ally came over and used his napkin. He looked up at her, and couldn't smile at her, he would be outcast from the Elite. After she left, he got up and told the rest of the Elite he would be back in abit, he needed to go find Ally and talk to her, and this was a chance to do it without anyone else in the elite seeing them talk.
 
Ally still couldn't believe what she had just done. She was so excited that she could barely contain herself. She let out a little squeal of delight, but she regained her composure as she heard the cafeteria door open behind her.

She looked back and saw Ryan walking in her direction. She knew she had his attention and this just confirmed it. As he walked towards her, she leaned back again the wall, looking at him with a smirk on her face.

"Come to warn me about the consequences of messing the Elite. Come to tell me that my social life has been wiped clean for rest of my natural life." Her smirk widened into a seductively smile as she asked, "Or is it that you just couldn't stay away?"
 
Ryan looked at her and smiled. "Hmm, maybe abit from Column A, and alot from Column B, can we go maybe someplace more private to talk for abit." He said looking at Ally, hoping the answer was going to be yes, he wanted to talk to her and knew that if The Elite saw them he would no longer be there leader, or even a member. He couldn't stand that happening he need the attention that brought him.

Ally was just so beautiful now, and had that attitude that didn't seem right with her, but it made her so irresistible. "Ally, please can I talk to you in private for abit, there are a few things I need to talk to you about, that I just can't tell you here, for both our sakes."
 
"It seems you're a bit more worried about the Elite than I am, but fine. I can't imagine what the leader of the Elite would need to talk to me about."

She led the way down the hallway to an empty classroom that was used to for storing unused furniture. The room was stacked high with desks, chairs, and other furniture.

She waited for him to walk in and she closed the door behind them, locking it. He was looking around like he had never been there before. She walked passed him and sat down on an old teacher's desk, crossing her legs towards and leaning back on her hands.

"Now what did I do to deserve this cozy little encounter?" She smiled and looked him up and down as he stood a few feet away from her.
 
Rick looked at her and smiled. "Hmm, well lets see you came back to school looking extremely hot, the hottest girl in the school, and well you got an attitude that seems to think you rule the place, either one of them is a good reason for me to talk to." He looked at her smiling. "Now first off, nice work with Sara back there, it was defiantly the best moment of the school year so far."

He turned and moved closer to her smiling. "Now first off, I want to explain something, I wish I could tell the Elite to stop, frankly I never wanted to start teasing you to begin with, but Sara wanted to, along with the rest of the females, and I might be the leader, but I can't stop the majority from wanting to do something, and until the bitches want to stop bugging you, the rest of the group won't stop bugging you, I can, but the rest won't."
 
"Hmm, well lets see you came back to school looking extremely hot, the hottest girl in the school, and well you got an attitude that seems to think you rule the place, either one of them is a good reason for me to talk to. Now first off, nice work with Sara back there, it was defiantly the best moment of the school year so far."

Ally smiled when he called her the hottest girl in school and she said, "I have a feeling that it will be first of many great moments. It's only just begun."

"Now first off, I want to explain something, I wish I could tell the Elite to stop, frankly I never wanted to start teasing you to begin with, but Sara wanted to, along with the rest of the females, and I might be the leader, but I can't stop the majority from wanting to do something, and until the bitches want to stop bugging you, the rest of the group won't stop bugging you, I can, but the rest won't."

Ally stood and walked closer to him until she was inches away, saying, "Aww...are you trying to protect me? I'm flattered, but the tricks Sara can come up with are the least of my concerns. But it is sweet of you to try and help me." She stood on her tiptoes and kissed him softly on the cheek before perching herself back on the desk.
 
Rick smiled at her after she kissed his cheek, his cock somehow resisting the urge to harden up, and reveal the attraction he felt towards her. "Look, I need to go now, just in case someone from the Elite spots me and you together." He looked at her smiling. "If you want to talk some more, meet me after class, outback, you know where the Elite used to always hang out last year. Its the first day I'll be the only one there, I look forward to seeing you there."

He turned and started to leave the room, wondering why he just did that for one, but more so what exactly happened in there, Ally was so hot now, and that kiss, he didn't expect that even if it was a friendly one on the cheek. He just smiled as he walked down the Hall, it was time for his Math Class.
 
"Look, I need to go now, just in case someone from the Elite spots me and you together. If you want to talk some more, meet me after class, outback, you know where the Elite used to always hang out last year. Its the first day I'll be the only one there, I look forward to seeing you there."

Ally watched as he walked out of the room, finding herself even more attracted to him. She waited a few minutes to make sure he had made it down the hallway before she left.

She looked at her schedule and noted that her next class was math. She headed off to the Math wing, not worrying about making an entrance after the showing in the cafeteria. She had made a lasting impression so she wasn't worried about turning people's heads.

She walked into her math class and noticed that Ryan was in her class. She noticed him looked up at her as she entered, but he immediately turned away when his friends looked to see what he was looking at.

Sara and her posse were in this class as well. Ally noticed that Sara had changed clothes and was glaring at her. Ally sat on the other side of the room and ignored their stares the entire class. She could feel them looking at her.

When class was over, Ally headed for the door, but was bumped out of the way by Sara and her group. Ally just laughed and said to the guys as they passed, "Impressive girls you got there." She pointed towards Sara and added, "That one especially. Future rocket scientist I think." She pushed her way pasted the Elite boys and made her way down the hallway.

She was supposed to meet Ryan outback now. She decided she'd make him wait a bit so she took her time going out to the back.

When she finally arrived, he was waiting for her.
 
Ryan was waiting 5 minutes for her, before she finally showed up, not like it mattered to him, it seemed every time she showed up she looked hotter. He wished he could of used his entire Math class to stare at her, but it seemed like half of Elite was in there, and it was all the girls, or the sluts as all the guys called them. He smiled at her as she got closer. "I'm glad you decided to show up."

He smiled at her once she was across from him, unable to say anything else, he was awestruck seeing her again, each time that day, he saw another part of her that made her look ever better in his eyes. He started to try to say something, but everything he was saying ended up just to be him stumbling over his own words, until he managed to spit out. "How was the day Ally?"
 
Ally thought it was cute that he seemed a little flustered around her. It was nice to know that she wasn't the only nervous one even though she refused to show her jitters. He said that he was glad that she was there and for once, she thought he was sincere.


"How was the day Ally?"

She laughed and said, "Pretty interesting. Though it seems like no one wants to speak to me. Kinda like every other year except it's more like they're intimidated by me instead of making fun of me."

She walked over close to him until she was inches away and asked with a seductive smirk, "Am I intimidating?"
 
"Yeah Ally you are abit now, alot because of how hot you are." He said smiling at her. "But probably alot has to do with how you are acting." He smiled at her. "I need to tell you something, acting like how The rest of the Elite does, especially those females, is not a way to get people to talk to you, in fact it does just the opposite." He looked at her turning away. "you probably want to know why I'm talking to you at all don't you."
 
Ally thought to herself, I don't really want people to talk to me....I want to take over. I don't need everyone to like me for me to take over. I just need one person.

"you probably want to know why I'm talking to you at all don't you." He turned away and she walked beside him, placing her hand on his shoulder.

"Honestly, I could think of a couple reasons why you want to talk to me, but you can tell me if you would like."
 
"Look I like, frankly I finally found you attractive before, and now even more so, even though Sara and them won't let me do what I want." He turned and looked back at her. "Ally I want you help to help me get rid of all the ties I have to the Elite, and help me have a normal, well at least what I view as normal social life."
 
"Look I like, frankly I finally found you attractive before, and now even more so, even though Sara and them won't let me do what I want. Ally I want you help to help me get rid of all the ties I have to the Elite, and help me have a normal, well at least what I view as normal social life."

Ally just looked at him for a moment with a blank expression on her face even though she was completely shocked on the inside.

"You don't want to be in the Elite? You run the school and you have just about anything you want. How could you not want that? I mean, true, your friends aren't the best bunch in the world, but I just don't understand. Why would you want me, of all people, to potentially ruin your social life?"
 
"Because Ally, I hate being a member of the Elite, I hate all the stupid stuff I need to do to people just to get the attention my body wants." He paused for a moment and stared at her. "You see the only reason Im in the Elite is because it gets me attention, and frankly I'm sick and tired of it now, I hate having to make fun of you, or anyone else in the school just because they are smart or look different."
 
"Because Ally, I hate being a member of the Elite, I hate all the stupid stuff I need to do to people just to get the attention my body wants." He paused for a moment and stared at her. "You see the only reason Im in the Elite is because it gets me attention, and frankly I'm sick and tired of it now, I hate having to make fun of you, or anyone else in the school just because they are smart or look different."

Ally was dumbfounded by his response and she just stood there for a moment letting it all sink in. All she knew was that people wanted to get into the Elite. She never thought people actually wanted to get out, let alone the leader. He seemed sincere and she couldn't help, but feel sorry for him. But wait---

She looked around her and asked, "Is this some kind of a joke? I mean, am I supposed to feel sorry for you and then all your Elite friends jump out and say GOTCHA? Am I supposed to just turn back in nerdy, understanding Ally who would melt at the slightest attention from you? Is that what you expect? Because it's not going to happen."

She backed away from him and said, "So you can tell Sara and the rest of your posse to come because the joke's over."
 
Rick just shook his head and started to walk away. "Damn Ally, I thought if there was one person that might listen and believe me, it might be you but I guess the girls got to you too much over the years, because they aren't here, as far as I know Sara and the rest are at the mall trying on some new clothes, they need to look their best for when they tease the new kids tonight." Rick turned back to her when he was almost too the parking lot. "Come find me when you think you can trust me."
 
Ally didn't expect that reaction from him at all. He actually was upset that she didn't trust him.

"Wait..." She said as he was walking towards the parking lot. "I trust you."

She walked over to him and took his hand in hers. "I'm sorry, but after you've been ridiculed for so long, it's hard to tell when someone is being sincere."

She squeezed his hand and said, "I promise you can talk to me about anything." She was letting the old Ally shine through a little.
 
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