resubmitted stories

[nakdsub]

Well, I just submitted re-writes for, "Picture Perfect," and "Not so Picture perfect." I also renamed them, "Picture Perfect Trilogy" Gary's story, Judy's story, and part 3, the end of the story.
I worked hard on these but grammar was never my strong suit, so I'm sure there are many mistakes in that respect.
I still have the 3rd part of the story to write yet, but I'm hoping to have that done with in a couple of days.
I'm dying to see what kind of reaction I get this time.
I hope everyone will watch for them when they're released and give me constructive ways to better my stories. Hopefully, the stories will be published is 4 or 5 days.
Thanks all.

 

[nakdsub]

Finished and submitted last chapter

I just finished and submitted the final chapter of, "Picture Perfect Trilogy." The first two chapter should be out in another 3 or 4 days, the final chapter a couple of days after that. I hope everyone will give me their feedback, (save the personal attacks).

This started out as a single story but I got so many questions and so much feedback about the wife's actions, that I felt another story from her perspective was warranted. Well that turned out to be more difficult than I had expected and the feedback I got was not encouraging. The criticism brought out several good points and were very valid in my opinion.

I don't like to disappoint my readers so I gave it one more shot. This time I wrote each chapter with the other in mind, so I believe the jell much better. I'm sure I still made a ton of grammatical errors. Let me apologize for those up front.

I hope you will give all three chapters a read and I sincerely hope you enjoy them.

 

[nakdsub]

resubmitted only to be rejected?

The first part of my re-written story is in today's, "New Stories." For those of you who read the original, this will be very similar, but not entirely the same. I tried to make it better. Please let me know if I succeeded.
Thank you.
http://www.literotica.com/s/picture-perfect-trilogy-pt-01

I'm assuming parts 2 and 3 will run consecutively.

 

[nakdsub]

Looking for feedback

I'm trying to make this a better story, please let me know if I did it.