Response on Gotta Have Faith

[CJT]

I would like to get some more feedback on this new series of mine. Right now I and II are on the site with III in Laurel's capable hands and I just sent IV off to be put on. What do you think of this series so far? I have recieved two comments in my email and it was much appreciated, but I would like to hear any complaints as well. I don't normally do the "celebrity" stuff but I gave it a shot. Should I continue or should I stop? Any help would be nice. If you haven't read the first two please do, you might like them. And if you have and are waiting on three and four well they should be posted soon!

CJT

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi, I must tell you, your story "Gotta Have Faith" is great. I felt drawn into the adventure of Tom right away. Peeping Tom more like it... Quite the job he has there! Far better then that of an FBI agent. I look forward to reading part 3 and 4 as well. Your writing is very well done, your flow is super, and you keep the reader rivited. Thanks for a great story. I read your other stories too, and they are also well done. Keep up the great work! If you ever like to check out my stories, they are found under the romance section =) Thanks Katerina Val-Kyrie

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Good lord, dont stop! Go on... Your great!

 

[CJT]

Thanks katerina for your comments, I have sent three and four and they should be posted probably this week if they are not too far behind!! This site keeps growing and growing and there are just the two of them running it so it takes awhile for them to post them. Hope you enjoy those as well. They do the best that they can which is fabulous!!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi hon, I just had the pleasure of reading your newest chapter in your series. It was awesome, a great story! I have to admit, the ending did surprise me. I loved it, very well done! You have a great talent, and I hope other readers out there check out Gotta Have Faith, a truly enjoyabe read! Thanks so much for sharing, can't wait to read the rest. Katerina =) Still have to learn how to get a yellow smiley on here!

 

[CJT]

Thanks katerina I hope others do read it and like it. I am trying to make them interesting and not the "usual" type celebrity stuff. Number four should be up real soon I sent it off the day after I sent three hope it is good for you too.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

CJT, You did it again, another amazing chapter! Keep up the great work! Katerina

 

[Michael]

CJT, I've read your first three chapters and thought the story was very nice. I liked how you made it apparent in chapter 2 that Faith evidently knew she was putting on a show for whoever might be lurking outside, checking her mirror for that purpose, even though you never actually came out and said it, and I enjoyed reading about the guard and Faith making love in chapter 3.

For some reason, and I'm not quite sure why, the episode between the nanny and the other employee came a little too soon in the story for me, although you handled it well in having it result in the guard having a hard-on when Faith's car pulled up. Anyway, I liked chapters 2 and 3 best, so far. Good luck with your writing!

 

[CJT]

Thank you guys for the response first off for Michael, I introduced the Nanny and the gardener first not only so the guard would be in a "stiff" position but to set up upcoming chapters, should be two left by the way, and I think you will see why here soon. That is the only disadvantage to writing one chapter at a time, I can't really set it up like I would if I were writing a book.

Katerina congrats on figuring out how to get the Yellow smiley face on here, now you will just have to explain to me how you did it!!!

 

[Butterfly]

Hey CJT just read all Got to have Faith and they are great. Keep it coming really flows and Just waiting to see what Tom is going to do. Will look forward to the future writings. Good Job.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

CJT... Putting a smiley on here is so easy, I felt almost silly hehe. Just hit the : key and then the ) of course put them together though, without the space. Once you check out your response, after typing it in, a smiley will be staring right back at ya like this

of course if you use ; instead and a ) you will get this

and if you are feeling pe-od and not to happy use : and then a ( like this

As soon as you make the faces on here, you will see them in the response, and that is all there is to it! have fun! Katerina