Whispersecret
Clandestine Sex-pressionist
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I need help filling in the blanks on this section of my newest story. Can anyone offer suggestions?
“It happened like this. Mom was only sixteen. She’d just bought her first car, a used one, and it conked out on her in Truckee. She brought it to the shop where Dad worked. He didn’t own it at the time. He looked it over and told her she’d have to leave it overnight. When she came back the next day, he told her it needed a lot of work. About two hundred dollars worth.
“What Dad didn’t know was that Mom knew a little bit about cars herself. She confronted him. She told him that she knew she only needed a ______, and not a new _______, like he said. She threatened to call the police and have the shop shut down.”
Then a little ways down the page there's this:
“She took pictures of the ___(auto part)__ and kept copies of his estimate. She told him that if he didn’t turn over a new leaf, she’d turn him in.
Please help!
“It happened like this. Mom was only sixteen. She’d just bought her first car, a used one, and it conked out on her in Truckee. She brought it to the shop where Dad worked. He didn’t own it at the time. He looked it over and told her she’d have to leave it overnight. When she came back the next day, he told her it needed a lot of work. About two hundred dollars worth.
“What Dad didn’t know was that Mom knew a little bit about cars herself. She confronted him. She told him that she knew she only needed a ______, and not a new _______, like he said. She threatened to call the police and have the shop shut down.”
Then a little ways down the page there's this:
“She took pictures of the ___(auto part)__ and kept copies of his estimate. She told him that if he didn’t turn over a new leaf, she’d turn him in.
Please help!