Requesting help from an Editor

[windstormy]

Hello, I am totally befuddled. lol. And I truly need some help. I can't spell worth a dern. And my punctuation stinks. lol At least I admit it, right?

Anyway, I write gay male stories (with plots). I'm usually writing some type of action adventure, or cliffhangers, something like that, with chapter after chapter of loaded fun for me writing. lol. I would also like some help with word usage and such. I have a tendency to be wordy at times. Also, some feedback on the plot, etc, etc, would be nice. Any kind of help would be nice really. Please?

I have a good sense of humor and I'm not easily offended. So, please help me. I'm so lost.

Please, help. I requested an editor when I started and haven't heard from him, yet. Would someone be so kind?

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=492595&page=submissions
Here is what I've done so far, if you'd like to take a look. I still have more to come in this novel, (working on the next book), and I'd truly like to make it better if I can. The last couple chapters have started to rate fairly high. Example, Ch 4 & 7. 8 just came out today and is up to a 4.92 already. So, I have a good following for this, but of course, I know that doesn't really mean much. It does to me, but...well... you know what I mean. whew. Let me hush, before I dig a hole already... lol

 

[Captain Midnight]

If you will submit to LadyCibelle ...

I am an assistant editor to LadyCibelle. I have edited about a half-dozen stories for her, and specialize in checking for ways to clarify the expression without changing the ideas. I always request that LadyCibelle send stories to me after she has checked in with the author, so she has information on them.

Gay male sex is definitely not my inclination, but with the understanding that I won't discuss the sex scenes (except in cases of language usage), I would be able to work on your story.

As noted, please submit directly to LadyCibelle. I am not a formal editor; I work for her as an assistant. I will take what she sends me and send it back to her.

Best wishes,

Captain Midnight