Strong BDSM, impact play, group sex, Master/slave.
A master and his slave navigate a ruined post-apocalyptic world, where the worst dangers come when night falls. He is growing ill. Knowing he won't always be there for her, he must find someone worthy to take his place.
Story is 30k words. It is a stand-alone, but is set in the same world as my last submission, A Lack of Suffering. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4911528&page=submissions
Looking for help with story flow, characterization, and grammar.
A master and his slave navigate a ruined post-apocalyptic world, where the worst dangers come when night falls. He is growing ill. Knowing he won't always be there for her, he must find someone worthy to take his place.
Story is 30k words. It is a stand-alone, but is set in the same world as my last submission, A Lack of Suffering. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4911528&page=submissions
Looking for help with story flow, characterization, and grammar.
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