I've been working a sequel to my series The Shopping Spree, called Masters' Night In. I originally planned it to be in three parts, but I'm currently finishing Part 4, with at least one more planned. The first three parts clock in at a little over 7000 words each. Part 4 is over 10,000 words and climbing. What started as a reasonably straightforward tale of a man discovering he enjoys being a crossdressing sex slave for a group of men has turned into a larger discussion on the what it means to be a man or a woman and the multiple revelations that come from sexual exploration. There's a lot of interior monologue and a lot more talking than sex, especially in part 3, which is largely a set up for the final parts.
While I enjoy the writing, I'm also concerned about the length of the introspective sections becoming redundant and boring to the reader. I would appreciate feedback on the overall tone of the story, as well as the balance among characterization, dialogue and the naughty parts. It's harder for me to be objective in this one, as it reflects many of my own ongoing struggles over my own identity.
I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement, though I prefer you leave your DOGE chainsaws behind.
While I enjoy the writing, I'm also concerned about the length of the introspective sections becoming redundant and boring to the reader. I would appreciate feedback on the overall tone of the story, as well as the balance among characterization, dialogue and the naughty parts. It's harder for me to be objective in this one, as it reflects many of my own ongoing struggles over my own identity.
I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement, though I prefer you leave your DOGE chainsaws behind.
