Request for feedback - Anal

[renorwood]

Hi all,

My second chapter was approved in a series I'm writing. It's in a different category than the first. I would appreciate any feedback you have to offer.

http://www.literotica.com/s/innocent-foot-rub-ch-02

Thanks!

 

[Hawkreader]

Anal

Story is nice. Amanda does wonderful actually I wish you continued with all the Anal fantasy Meanwhile, please do let me know few links for the best Anal episodes in Literotica.

Thanks

 

[joelafayette]

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[JrCross]

Pretty damn good, sexy story and good writing.