Remedial School Ch. 1 Feedback

[LGibsonsTiedMind]

Hello, I am a new author, and would love some feedback on my new story, Remedial School Ch. 1.

Here is a link: https://www.literotica.com/s/remedial-school-ch-01

Of course I plan to make more chapters, but it would love to hear people's thoughts about this first part. Any constructive critiques would be appreciated, along with things that you liked or didn't like about it.

Thanks in advance!

 

[StrangeView]

Just read it; I liked it, seems like a good start to an interesting plot. Well done, and I'll look forward to the next installment .

 

[LGibsonsTiedMind]

Thanks! Care to give any detail? What did you like about it in particular?

 

[Nellymcboatface]

Thanks! Care to give any detail? What did you like about it in particular?

ha ha, I liked it... nice build up... The ball gag was a nice `shock' to kick the story.

It builds up nicely, `is this for real' thoughts and `could they really pass a law for that ?' ha ha.
Almost a dystopian future...
I certainly knew a few of my kids school friends could have done with gagging...

Nice length for a cup of coffee, but don't let that stop you....

Cheers.
Stay safe.
Nelly