Reluctant g/f shared with bellboy........

[ShandyLeer]

So, I'm new here.

And looking for some experienced help with the nucleus of a scene I have in mind.....I have the start but am interested where it ought to go. It's more of a (porn) movie scene than a story, in my mind at least.

Natalie is a hot, but very classy - say late 30's - beauty, with a slim size 8 figure and perfect natural curves. Her partner Nick is a good looking guy too - a cool, successful couple who know how to behave in the best places. Glamorous even.

They're on vacation in Venice and have a suite at a stunning, but discreet hotel. They've spent a romantic day in the city, eaten well and drunk a little too much - before and after dinner - in the hotel restaurant.

She could handle a drink, but champagne had a special effect.......made her inclined to be horny. A little uninhibited compared to her usual self. The sure sign she was in the mood was probably invisible to most, but Nick knew her well enough and he could see the look in her eye as she sipped the last of her brandy.

This was the cue to head back to the suite, and he orders another bottle of Moët be brought to their room as they pass by reception on the way to the grand, sweeping staircase.

Within minutes they're back in their room, first in the lounge - kissing and touching one another.

He sets a hot porn movie playing on his iPad, he doesn't need to ask her to watch. He knows she will - knows that it, and the champagne and the day in such a romantic city will take her up another level. Besides, he loves to fuck her when she's watching other hot girls getting screwed too.

Soon, they're in the bedroom and begin undressing each other on the beautiful four poster. She's still watching the iPad occasionally from the corner of her eye. The girl in the movie is sexy no doubt, but it's good that the guy is too as far as Natalie's concerned. And the girl in the movie, any moment now, is going to unzip the guy and reveal his cock...

By now Natalie's down to her black lingerie, getting hotter and hotter as her guy strokes and caresses her. As the girl in the movie takes out her co-stars thick, heavy dick and starts to slowly pump it, so Natalie - getting still hotter at the sight of the actors cock, her breath getting faster - does the samewith her man's only slightly less impressive length too.

Soon Nick slides inside her - slowly from behind - as she's laid on her side. She's still watching the girl on the screen, who's now stroking a second cock with her other hand, after an extra guy appeared in the scene. Natalie moans, partly at the feel of the fucking she's getting from behind, as her partner slides right in up to his balls, and partly at the though of the girl having 2 of these things to play with.

Now Nick is laid flat on the bed, with Nat' riding him reverse cowgirl. He's grinding into her really deep, and she's loving every inch as it's given - and as it's taken away. Movie girl is now on all fours and has one of those cocks in her mouth, and one's about to be stuck in her pussy from behind.......the thought makes Natalie groan some more..........

........the click of the latch is almost silent, and maybe the sound from the iPad - low as it was - drowned out the sound of a knock at the distant lounge door. But at the now open bedroom door, with a bottle of Moët and 2 champagne flutes on a silver tray, is the most handsome bellboy Natalie could possibly imagine. Tall and fit and immaculate and cute. But not so cute as to be shy of staring straight at her. First at her eyes. Then her perfect tits. And then her cock filled pussy........



So, that's the set up. I've no idea whether it's got much going for it, but does anyone have any suggestions for where it heads next, or how better to refine it ??

Thx.
Shandy

 

[sirhugs]

solid start, just needs what is there to be fleshed out and continued.

Almost infinite possibilities as too how it goes from there:

~ the bellboy jerks off watching, splattering them, but revives enough to join in round two.

~ the bellboy pours the champagne over them, licks them clean, then eats cream pie

~ same with the champagne over just her, no male/male contact

~ they spit roast her

~ she takes it both in pussy and ass.

~ they tie Nick up and make him watch as bellboy fills all three of her holes...

etc.

 

[ShandyLeer]

solid start, just needs what is there to be fleshed out and continued.

Almost infinite possibilities as too how it goes from there:

~ the bellboy jerks off watching, splattering them, but revives enough to join in round two.

~ the bellboy pours the champagne over them, licks them clean, then eats cream pie

~ same with the champagne over just her, no male/male contact

~ they spit roast her

~ she takes it both in pussy and ass.

~ they tie Nick up and make him watch as bellboy fills all three of her holes...

etc.

Thanks SH, appreciate the feedback.

I'd figured that, up to the point the guy walks in the bedroom and catches the couple fucking, the set up is sexy but neutral - plain vanilla you might say. The porn she's watching whilst getting screwed is there just to hint that maybe she'd consider something new, rather than screaming and slamming the door closed.......

Where it goes, and how she reacts, immediately after the bellboy disturbs them is key and would need to be believable. I don't like the obvious route, where the girls are always in mini skirts and up for anything - without any explanation why they would do stuff so out of character.

TBH I wouldn't intend - for my own tastes - for it to be a story about the boyfriend/husband being particularly submissive. His willingness to share her at all is sub enough for me, the point being he knows she's not going to run away with the bellboy afterwards, so he can confidently allow her to do something dangerous provided he gets off on it too. But I get it that it appeals to lots of people.

For me it's more about how she engages with the 2nd guy - not sure whether she, for example, should give in and go the whole way and fuck both men every which way. Or whether it's better she tries to keep some control - maybe the bellboy is only allowed to touch himself, or she's only ready to jerk him ? Believability is the thing. The last time my g/f talked about the "stranger" fantasy during sex she let the imaginary guy fuck her mouth, and her ass - but not her pussy.

Either way she's going to end up taking a load from both guys - where and how is the part to build out !

Again, thx for feedback.

SL

 

[PattieD]

The couple continues with their lovemaking with Natalie prone. Head upon pillow. Nick missionary and fully concentrated on both of their pleasures.

This will be Natalie's first time being watched while being penetrated and she is enjoying it to her surprise; both mentally and sexually. Her eye lock with the bell boy is enabling her to have orgasms that are explosively wet while the bell boy remains silent.

Natalie's eyes gravitate towards the bell boy's crotch which is not be concealed but more revealed as they are light gray and tight fitting. She can slowly make out his growing erection and the dimensions of his penis slowly turning cock.

Nick's inevitable orgasm slows the rocking of the bed as he collapses upon her. As she slowly feels him shrink inside her, she asks the bell boy if he enjoyed "the show".

Two immediate reactions; Nick looks up at Natalie's gaze and clumsily reels around to see the bell boy reacting totally red faced and totally erect

Getting off the bed while grabbing the sheet to cover his softening penis Nick is about to interrogate the bell boy when Natalie interjects

"Well. Did you like what you see?" smiling at his face while seeing his bulge in her peripherals.

The bell boy remained silent. Frozen. Unable to make a decision.

"I think you more than liked what you saw didn't you?" crawling across the bed towards him not worrying about her state of undress.

Nick was also speechless as he watched Natalie approach this young man both aroused and somehow still professional. Nick is also speechless for the surprise of seeing this hotel employee and the tone of Natalie's commanding voice.

"I like what I see and would like to see more" as she eased off the bed onto her knees in front of the bell boy. A young man petrified in many ways.

Natalie easily found the means to release his arousal as the bell boy amazingly never left his pose; standing straight with his hands clasped behind him.

"Nick. Would you like to see more?" she said as a few simple actions and an unzipping enabled his pants to easily fall to his ankles. Natalie's face was just inches away from what clothing remained. Tight briefs made tighter by the distinct outline of an engorged cock trying to escape from beneath his waistband. . .

 

[ShandyLeer]

Good work PattieD.

Like it that she's missionary and can see the bellboy over her b/f shoulder - keeping the b/f unaware.

Good too that Nick cums before he notices the stranger. He's sidelined for a few minutes.

And if Nat then crawls along the bed toward the bellboy like you say, on her hands and knees then it's hot - to me - that she's doing it having just, presumably, being cummed in ? Or did Nick shoot his load somewhere else ?

 

[PattieD]

Oh no.
Always inside. Hence, the mention of his shrinking inside.
Staring at a frozen bell boy while Nick was still inside her was in her mind like a threesome. Talking to him while he was still inside her gave her a sense of domination over them both

 

[ShandyLeer]

Oh no.
Always inside. Hence, the mention of his shrinking inside.
Staring at a frozen bell boy while Nick was still inside her was in her mind like a threesome. Talking to him while he was still inside her gave her a sense of domination over them both

Makes complete sense. Sorry I missed the shrinking inside part.....you'd got it covered.

99% of porn directors I'm sure would have Nick cum over her, not in her. It means you get a hot shot of her making toward the stranger at the end of the bed with a heavy load over her face, or dripping from her tits. It's all good for the video - but I think you're right, it's more intense that she's had her pussy filled by her guy.

And yes, her breaking the silence and addressing the stranger whilst still impaled on a softening Nick puts her in the driving seat.

 

[PattieD]

"impaled"
What a great word. Almost violent

 

[ShandyLeer]

"impaled"
What a great word. Almost violent

As it happens, the bellboys called "Vlad"

 

[PattieD]

OMG!!!
Vlad the Impaler
Bell boy turned viking

 

[ShandyLeer]

OMG!!!
Vlad the Impaler
Bell boy turned viking

Actually no.

It's his cousin.

He runs a sideline, besides being a well hung bellboy, in a start up vaping business in Romania.

Vlad the Inhaler.

 

[PattieD]

Ahhhhh
Well hung
. . . as I suspected

 

[ShandyLeer]

Ahhhhh
Well hung
. . . as I suspected

Yes, I walked right into a cliche there.......your version was superior what with "engorged cock trying to escape his waistband" etc.

Very good.

 

[Carnevil9]

Actually no.

It's his cousin.

He runs a sideline, besides being a well hung bellboy, in a start up vaping business in Romania.

Vlad the Inhaler.

https://i.redd.it/hegb935wz9v01.jpg

 

[PattieD]

My scenarios tend to have men and women in revealing yet concealing clothing.
Men in tight briefs are so easily accentuated when they are even the slightest bit aroused

 

[sirhugs]

My scenarios tend to have men and women in revealing yet concealing clothing.
Men in tight briefs are so easily accentuated when they are even the slightest bit aroused

and those female poking nipples...

 

[PattieD]

Which cause me to stare

 

[sirhugs]

Which cause me to stare

and want to share

 

[JRaven]

I read this thread yesterday and had thought of a few things to comment on. Then I had to attend to a fowl in the oven.

Paragraph 5 - "but champagne had a special effect"

and - "he could see the look in her eye as she sipped the last of her brandy."

It made me a bit confused. So since she's drinking brandy instead of champagne, she's not horny?

As for sirhugs comment, "~ they spit roast her
" is my favorite position!

Regarding your comment about the boyfriend/husband not being submissive... Neither is my husband. He justs like watching live action porn, starring his favorite porn queen, ME!

Boyfriend or Husband
Make it the husband. There's more attachment with a husband. She's not going to leave him for the bellboy. And, there's more naughtiness.

If you would like to extend the story a little bit, the bellboy excuses himself and leaves quickly. The next evening, the Monet is ordered along with three glasses. Again, he interrupts the love making. Nat instructs the bellboy, "pour three glasses for all of us and and strip."


Jenny

 

[ShandyLeer]

I read this thread yesterday and had thought of a few things to comment on. Then I had to attend to a fowl in the oven.

Paragraph 5 - "but champagne had a special effect"

and - "he could see the look in her eye as she sipped the last of her brandy."

It made me a bit confused. So since she's drinking brandy instead of champagne, she's not horny?

As for sirhugs comment, "~ they spit roast her
" is my favorite position!

Regarding your comment about the boyfriend/husband not being submissive... Neither is my husband. He justs like watching live action porn, starring his favorite porn queen, ME!

Boyfriend or Husband
Make it the husband. There's more attachment with a husband. She's not going to leave him for the bellboy. And, there's more naughtiness.

If you would like to extend the story a little bit, the bellboy excuses himself and leaves quickly. The next evening, the Monet is ordered along with three glasses. Again, he interrupts the love making. Nat instructs the bellboy, "pour three glasses for all of us and and strip."


Jenny

The brandy was just a post dinner thing JR. A "digestif" if a person wanted to be all pompous and gauche about it.

The champagne is what she's been steadily sampling since early afternoon, and explains her subsequent lack of inhibition.

You're right, it needs to be a married couple, the "she's not going to leave him for the bellboy" thing you mention rings completely true to me.

It's an interesting twist - the deferment of the adventure to the following evening. We should run with that...