rejection

[mariethetv]

ive just had my first story approved on here today and tried my hardest to get the second instalment of my series approved but was rejected yet again.i need someone to look over and amend the mistakes ive made,i really am trying to get better and would really appreciate advice,help in my writing.any offers would be greatly appreciated

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you specify the genre of your story (eg romance, non-consent, incest, gay male, lesbian, etc), and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

ive just had my first story approved on here today and tried my hardest to get the second instalment of my series approved but was rejected yet again.i need someone to look over and amend the mistakes ive made,i really am trying to get better and would really appreciate advice,help in my writing.any offers would be greatly appreciated

I read your first story and thought it was pretty close to lit's limits.

What reasons did they give for rejecting your second submission?