I am writing a rather lengthy story so it's necessary to break it up into chapters. I submitted chapter one which was accepted. Over 80 visitors voted on it and it was rated at 4.5. Three people made favourable comments and I had various emails.
So I submitted chapter two which was in similar vein, but this was rejected. I checked everything and thought it might be rejected because of one character who was a naked young student. I therefore amended the story specifically stating that her age was 21. It was rejected a second time, so I took the advice under the "reason" and submitted it to an editor. He also could find no reason for the rejection. I have sent two emails asking for a SPECIFIC reason for the rejection but so far have had no reply.
So now I have arrived at an impasse. I have had emails asking when chapter two is going to appear; it has already been posted on other sites, and chapter three will soon follow. So do I submit chapter three? If I do, readers will wonder where chapter two got to and if it is posted as "chapter two" this will cause further confusion.
All I need to know is what words or paragraphs are the cause of the rejection - a simple copy and paste job. Then I will know what to amend. Any advice will be welcome.
So I submitted chapter two which was in similar vein, but this was rejected. I checked everything and thought it might be rejected because of one character who was a naked young student. I therefore amended the story specifically stating that her age was 21. It was rejected a second time, so I took the advice under the "reason" and submitted it to an editor. He also could find no reason for the rejection. I have sent two emails asking for a SPECIFIC reason for the rejection but so far have had no reply.
So now I have arrived at an impasse. I have had emails asking when chapter two is going to appear; it has already been posted on other sites, and chapter three will soon follow. So do I submit chapter three? If I do, readers will wonder where chapter two got to and if it is posted as "chapter two" this will cause further confusion.
All I need to know is what words or paragraphs are the cause of the rejection - a simple copy and paste job. Then I will know what to amend. Any advice will be welcome.