rejected?

Silverluna

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The following is what i thought to be a story i would post
but it was rejected....oh well i am not broken up over it...
Just well enjoy? I could post this im sure in some other board but i love you guys enough to torture you with it...


I slip down on my knees....my hands slip inside your pants to find the secret inside them. Ah Ha! I found it...slowly I slip it out and lightly run my palms over the head and shaft...oh wow...its so hard...and pulsing...mhh...Bet it would taste good, you whisper as if reading my mind. Eager to please you I give it a few nice long licks...to see how my tounge and mouth effect you. Amazingly the cock manages to harden even more!! Wow, I mutter as I lick my lips enjoying the sensations spawned from the simple licks. I try again to test this newly found pleasure....I slowly kiss the head...mhh....I feel the moisture of recently awakened lust lap at my lips as I continue my kisses down the hard shaft. I hear you moan and claw at the bedding , you've laid back on the bed, as I am kneeling still on the floor, your ram-rod cock pointed right at my mouth....seaking its own hot bed.
Slowly I pull back, my head is spinning....I whisper, a few kisses can do that? You just shiver and nod weakly....I like this feeling of power as I try to "french kiss" your meat...Lips and tounge must work even better than one or the other....Your groans and moans confer my notions...I continue this newly found kissing technique and slowly open up to recieve your cock thats pressing against me with every kiss...Soon I discover that your cock is mostly inside my mouth!! Ohhhh I didn't know you put that there ! I slowly suck on it...instinctivly...as a baby to its mother's teat. Mhh....Mhh....oh baby!
I cry lustly for something I am not sure of yet.
I continue this sucking motion until I feel you tense and splatter your white "strings of passion" all over my mouth and surprised face!! At first it's disgust...then it slowly turns into passion as I lick all along your cock and begin to eat up the "passion strings" ......I sit up and smile slowly at you....You are gasping for breath ...unsure exactly what this creature lapping between your legs has done to you....
 
It may have been too short. The stories need to be at least 750 words.
 
I didn't realize there was a word minimum for the stories, but that must be why it was rejected. Since my stories suck, and they've all been posted, I can't imagine it's a quality issue.
 
There is definitely a word minimum. It's under the submission guidelines.
 
also a tiny clause about accepting material from anyone who's a jedi priestess
 
Ummm...i still think it was good..got a great reaction out of me...imagining Silverluna doing that to me....mmm :D
 
*shrug* i wouldnt konw the first thing about giving head...im a virgin...*drinks her apple juice like its vodka*
 
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