Rejected Story Offer

BilyumQ

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Recently I submitted a story for the BDSM section which was rejected by the webmasters, the reason given noted by the following comments from their guidelines section;

• Is there excessive degradation, violence, snuff, or abuse of characters in your submission? If it is submitted as a Horror story, is it more snuff than actual horror?

While I’m saddened with their decision to reject the story I nonetheless recognize and respect their right to do so. After all they have established guidelines for the good of all and if they feel this story does not meet those guidelines then they did the right thing. I appreciate they have provided this vehicle which allows writers, aspiring writers and dabblers (this last category is where I fit in) the means to get our stories and poems ‘out there’ and its understandable they demand certain standards in return. There are no hard feelings about this rejection and in fact have already submitted another story for the non-erotica section.

With that said I’d still like to make available a copy of this story, titled “An Innocent’s Ordeal”, to anyone who would like to read it. But be warned Literotica rejected this story for a reason. This is not a story with a lot of warmth or love. Rather it’s a story of disappointment, regret, kidnapping, abuse, brutality, torture and degradation but also ultimately of hope, retribution and rebirth. It’s the story of primarily three individuals; Corrie Carlson, Ida Bell and Philip Kent. The latter two characters are career criminals who the former character, an innocent somewhat naïve housewife, has the misfortune of crossing paths with.

I admit the story is raw and perhaps a bit intense for some, but however given the whacko’s we hear about from time to time I don’t believe this story is too far removed from reality.

In spite of Literotica’s decision to reject this story I still feel its worthy of a read (of course I may be bias) and hope you chose to do so. And please keep in mind this story is just that…a story and does not reflect my personal feelings, beliefs, actions or practices. Oh and by the way as a sidebar, this is the first story I’ve attempted that hasn’t been written in the first person.

If you’d like a copy please send an e-mail to BilyumQ@hotmail.com with the words “Rejected Story 6-06” in the subject line and as soon as practical I’ll forward a .PDF copy to you.

Thank you,

BilyumQ
 
Rejected story offer

I got a copy of this story and read it over the weekend. I didn't think it was violent at all in fact have seen harder BDSM movies. There was no snuff but the lady was brutalized and they get theirs in the end. I think the writer overstated its torture and degradation. Yeah the woman was worked over but like i said i've seen movies that were much worse then what he describes. If you like BDSM stories you'd like this one. Also i think anyone who likes a good story would like this one because i don't think its just for the BDSM crowd. Its well written and i liked it. So did my gf. Just thought i'd put my 2 cents in.
 
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