Red Handcuffs
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Gladist said:little red cuffs
on tiny white hands
bring tears of joy
to my lonely gray life
Any comments?
Hi Gladist and welcome to the poetry forum.
For some reason this poem makes me think of a baby wearing a red jumper and that you're happy as Larry in your old age.
On the other hand, it could mean something completely different like handcuffs - in which case 'tiny' white hands kind of makes me shudder a little as for me tiny relates to a child.
Just on another note, I'm aware of adjectives at the moment and your poem has six or seven. Wow.
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I saw the title and of course my bdsm brain thought red, fur-lined restraints.wildsweetone said:Hi Gladist and welcome to the poetry forum.
For some reason this poem makes me think of a baby wearing a red jumper and that you're happy as Larry in your old age.
On the other hand, it could mean something completely different like handcuffs - in which case 'tiny' white hands kind of makes me shudder a little as for me tiny relates to a child.
Just on another note, I'm aware of adjectives at the moment and your poem has six or seven. Wow.
But after reading the poem, it seems sweet and not kinky. I agree with you wild girl--too many adjectives.
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WickedEve said:I saw the title and of course my bdsm brain thought red, fur-lined restraints.
I agree with you wild girl--too many adjectives.
I wish the 'Title:' line on posts would show up when I quote somebody's post. I might at least not always be so ignorant of poem titles. Well, maybe.
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flyguy69 said:
It did on me too, and I agree.
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WickedEve said:Oh, I thought the title was red cuffs. It is handcuffs.
I have to admit this poem is driving me as nuts as that wheelbarrow poem.
Gladist, if you want to see my free-reign thoughts on this poem, please let me know. I'll keep it in a file unless asked.
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WickedEve said:
RainMan has been pushing a wheelbarrow around, haven't you seen him?
(In the Worthwhile Reading Thread. )
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WickedEve said:
conjures up a fair image, methinks.
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WickedEve said:
without doubt.
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WickedEve said:
wildsweetone said:
and i'm sure one of you two ladies, or both, will be posting it any time now.
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I'm actually going to add it to a poem. If I get a chance to do that apple challenge, then you and your wheelbarrow will appear in it. Not sure what you're doing with the wheelbarrow, yet. Probably something mysterious. Maybe gruesome. Some perversion that decent folks only dream about.TheRainMan said:and i'm sure one of you two ladies, or both, will be posting it any time now.
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TheRainMan said:and i'm sure one of you two ladies, or both, will be posting it any time now.
i'm busy cogitating
i may have to write it at work, or later.
you and your wheelbarrow are not a taboo subject for me RainMan.
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flyguy69 said:
Note to self: lit server gives bad blow jobs.
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I would love to see your free-reigning thoughts on my poem. I won't lie - I wanted to generate some replies and then be mysterious and confusing with my replies, but I changed my mind. It is intended to have many different meanings, you make what you want out of it.
But wildsweetone, please go ahead and post your thoughts. I would rather that than holding back.
Chit Chat:
Hi everyone. I was out for the whole day celebrating. It kind of surprised me to see 20 replies, I was thinking "Oh my, either I've created a work of art by accident, or I've embarassed myself to hell." Instead I get a thread hijack. Which could be a good thing if it makes more people curious to view the poem...or not.
I would love to see your free-reigning thoughts on my poem. I won't lie - I wanted to generate some replies and then be mysterious and confusing with my replies, but I changed my mind. It is intended to have many different meanings, you make what you want out of it.
But wildsweetone, please go ahead and post your thoughts. I would rather that than holding back.
Chit Chat:
Hi everyone. I was out for the whole day celebrating. It kind of surprised me to see 20 replies, I was thinking "Oh my, either I've created a work of art by accident, or I've embarassed myself to hell." Instead I get a thread hijack. Which could be a good thing if it makes more people curious to view the poem...or not.
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wildsweetone said:
OMG< WSO< we slaughtered that thread last night. I was so ashamed of what I wrote I deleted my posts!!! well, not ashamed, just afraid that it wasnt me that wrote it, lol.
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about the red handcuffs.
my first impression was of a "big" guy with a "tiny" sub, like Eve said not kinky, my kinky brain won out and thats what I got from it.
