BitterIchor
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Sep 10, 2005
- Posts
- 287
...a good lesbian erotic story, please. I've perused literotica for a long (we're talking years here) time now and during that time I've found about 3 stories I really liked. I'm getting sick of this place, but I decided to give it one last chance. I'd like you all to help me.
I want well-written stories. That means knowing the difference between "their" and "they're". It also means having the language skills to know how to use paragraphs, "your/you're", not use seventeen exclamation marks or questions marks, proper spacing, descriptive language (that is, beyond sentences like "she is blonde and has big tits"). It also means some sort of grasp of setting an event in motion, not just shoving a bunch of people together and describing (in the most vulgar way possible) how they fuck each other. The situation in which the character interact with each other is the key to getting my interest, not how much bodily fluids gets expelled or how many foreign items get put in various body cavities. I want erotic situations and tasteful descriptions of sex, not some desensitized reprobates grossest modern porn fantasy.
Also...
- No straight male fantasies about married women who have "girl sex".
- No men in sexual situations whatsoever.
- No use of the word "womyn".
- Clichés are sometimes tolerable if they are handled sensibly, but since they never are, I'd prefer it if all the cheerleaders, nurses, mudwrestlers, vampires, etc are left out.
- No use of the word "nympho".
- No bloody netspeak (ie, "r", "ure", "lol").
I could go on forever with this, but I think you got the point. I realize all these demands might seem unreasonable, but I won't apologize for having a certain sense quality control. I also realize these stories are written by happy amateurs and that they deserve all the credit they get for sharing their work. I don't mean to be mean or anything, I'm just picky.
I want well-written stories. That means knowing the difference between "their" and "they're". It also means having the language skills to know how to use paragraphs, "your/you're", not use seventeen exclamation marks or questions marks, proper spacing, descriptive language (that is, beyond sentences like "she is blonde and has big tits"). It also means some sort of grasp of setting an event in motion, not just shoving a bunch of people together and describing (in the most vulgar way possible) how they fuck each other. The situation in which the character interact with each other is the key to getting my interest, not how much bodily fluids gets expelled or how many foreign items get put in various body cavities. I want erotic situations and tasteful descriptions of sex, not some desensitized reprobates grossest modern porn fantasy.
Also...
- No straight male fantasies about married women who have "girl sex".
- No men in sexual situations whatsoever.
- No use of the word "womyn".
- Clichés are sometimes tolerable if they are handled sensibly, but since they never are, I'd prefer it if all the cheerleaders, nurses, mudwrestlers, vampires, etc are left out.
- No use of the word "nympho".
- No bloody netspeak (ie, "r", "ure", "lol").
I could go on forever with this, but I think you got the point. I realize all these demands might seem unreasonable, but I won't apologize for having a certain sense quality control. I also realize these stories are written by happy amateurs and that they deserve all the credit they get for sharing their work. I don't mean to be mean or anything, I'm just picky.
