Realistic Cuckolding

[Sean Renaud]

First of all I would like to mention that I'm not a fan of cuckold stories as a whole. Half of my reasoning for writing this story is to finally take one of the most tried and true formulas of this site and turn it upside down I'm just curious what people think would go over well. In a nut shell here is what I have.

Husband is in the military and goes over seas. Wifey cheats on him with the bag boy from the local supermart. She gets caught by a neighbor who has raunchy sex with her. She falls in love with the bag boy. She falls in lust with the naughty neighbor. Husband is going to come home unexpectantly (or she loses track of time, one or the other) but the point is he catches her in bed with the neighbor and gets pissed off. Arguement ensues and he tells her it he would have been cool with it if she'd told him the truth instead of hiding it from him. Anyway he kicks her out and tells her he'll be filing for a divorce. I'm up in the air over if he will or won't get into a fight with the neighbor. (If I do I might have to add a chapter or stretch it out since I tend to write WWF style fights.) Anywho she goes running to the bagboy hoping he'll console her. He's going to console her, treat her nice take her out someplace or what not. (He still thinks he's the man in her life and he was going to propose to her.) At that point either her real husband is going to call or something else to finally blow the cover she'd so successfully kept up for so many months. In the end she is going to end up with nothing. Either that or she will go back to the neighbor who will use her as a sex toy thus giving me the option to write with the charachter some more if people like her. What I'm looking for is a few ideas to flesh it out more and what kinds of things should be added. I want to grab the crowd that is constantly reading the cuckold stories (for whatever reason) and then blasting them to bits because the women are whores. I want people to read mine and say that's really what could happen.

 

[sirhugs]

I have only written one LW story where the wife is portrayed badly. It has done stunningly poorly. Each LW story gets some bnegative feedback from injured souls or moralists who leave me wondering why they read a story they know will upset them. The feedback for my 'bad wife' story (Wife's Day of Escape ) was rabid.

I do like the bag boy touch though.

I'm very against the 'women are whores' philosophy in general. Whores are humans too, and women in gereral are nicer than men.

 

[Mikro]

I'm very against the 'women are whores' philosophy in general. Whores are humans too, and women in gereral are nicer than men.

I entirely agree.

Now to the thread

If you feel that strongly why not have the husband take her back on his terms. to use and pass around as he see's fit. Maybe he can prostitute her to the neighbour or something.

Surely that's better punishment than, "Get lost you lousy whore."

 

[Sean Renaud]

I imagine it has more to do with lost trust but the prostitution idea has potential. I have no intention of portraying her as the villian so much as the bad guy. I don't want to portray her as a whore, I want to portray her as somebody who was lonely and found somebody who made her happy.

 

[poirot515]

you can have her be left poor and lonely after a divorce. She ends up doing drugs and to support her drug habit, working for a black pimp as a hooker, until her husband picks her up and they make up, with the hubby thinking that she has had enough punishment.

 

[sirhugs]

I imagine it has more to do with lost trust but the prostitution idea has potential. I have no intention of portraying her as the villian so much as the bad guy. I don't want to portray her as a whore, I want to portray her as somebody who was lonely and found somebody who made her happy.

is there a difference between 'villain' and 'bad guy'. Maybe if she was unhappy, her actions were the best thing to do. How can that be bad?

 

[JRaven]

I entirely agree.

Now to the thread

If you feel that strongly why not have the husband take her back on his terms. to use and pass around as he see's fit. Maybe he can prostitute her to the neighbour or something.

Surely that's better punishment than, "Get lost you lousy whore."

My first thought on the prostitution bit was to have the husband share her with the single guys in his unit. The ones without wives or girlfriends to have sex with after spending a year in the desert.

Jenny

 

[Sean Renaud]

First in response to Sir Hugs. Dude you are like one of my heroes. I really look up to you and wish I was as good as you and it would be an honor to be mentioned in the same breath as you. As far as bad guy and villian I don't know how else to phrase it. I want the reader to understand that she is betraying a sacred trust to somebody who is away and unable to defend themselves. But I want it to be realistic, she doesn't hate her husband. She doesn't cheat because her husband has a small dick, she doesn't cheat because she hates her husband, she cheats because she's lonely and needs a man in her life. I don't want to make an evil whore, just a sexually active woman who's decisions aren't the best for herself or those around her.

The idea of pimping her out to the unit is actually one of the better ideas. I might have to consider that, I'm already a few chapter in, if I go that route I'll easilly get a few more. Thanks you Raven.

 

[sirhugs]

Hero? Thanks, I guess. Might be a burden as much as a reward.

I think our difference is in my rejection of the stereotype of extra marital sex as 'cheating'. Just me. And in real life, not everyone 'punishes' the wife.

I'll be curious, given negative reaction to my story, how yours is received.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Writing a realistic cuckolding story is difficult for a number of reasons. One significant one is, you are dealing with what in reality invovles a huge number of decisions, judgements, and perceptions. these are often in conflict with one another. If you were to try to accurately portray that, in most instances you would be writing a psych paper rather than an erotic story. IN the abscence of the time or inclination, authors aterdown this aspect to perhaps a few musings.

A married woman will, in general, consider a lot of things before she cheats. A man who finds his wife involved in an affair will usually consider a huge number of things, rangeing from his love of her, to the expected reaction, to what he can live with and what he can't. Usually, trust is destroyed or seriously harmed and writing about rebuilding it could take months.

I doubt a realistic cuckolding story would do well on this site. It would be a cross between psyche paper and case study, with little room left for the "good parts".

 

[sirhugs]

Colly has expounded on my point. As usual, more clearly than my post.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Point taken,, thank you for the input.

 

[oOScarletWingsOo]

Depends On How You Define It

Writing a realistic cuckolding story is difficult for a number of reasons. One significant one is, you are dealing with what in reality invovles a huge number of decisions, judgements, and perceptions. these are often in conflict with one another. If you were to try to accurately portray that, in most instances you would be writing a psych paper rather than an erotic story. IN the abscence of the time or inclination, authors aterdown this aspect to perhaps a few musings.

I'm going to disagree with this just a little bit. I think if you take the story to the level where you are "analyzing" then yes, it won't come off very well. But if you show some decision making with your characters then that will only strengthen the story by making them more real to the reader.

I'm not sure what the reader climate is in here but I don't see why your version won't work. The only thing I'm a little unsure of is how your story fits into the category.

My thinking/understanding of a cockold husband is a man who is more submissive than the character you are creating. Your story sounds more like what I've heard called "hot wife". Hot wife being the wife is more "slutty" or "whorish" and the husband is more or less "pimping" her out for his enjoyment. Less as a vengeful
choice then what I'm getting from your description. For the story to fit into this theme I think the husband would have to get off on seeing his wife being fucked by other guys rather than making her more or less he personal hooker to shell out.

 

[Anshu]

Cuckolding story

I tried to write a cuckold story from a different angle. I am glad that it received good comments, except for one or two.
It's called 'The Boss Knows'
I would love you to tell me your opinion.
My address is adovis@hotmail.com

Thanks

 

[slipfreak46]

A point of view

First of all I would like to mention that I'm not a fan of cuckold stories as a whole. Half of my reasoning for writing this story is to finally take one of the most tried and true formulas of this site and turn it upside down I'm just curious what people think would go over well. In a nut shell here is what I have.

Husband is in the military and goes over seas. Wifey cheats on him with the bag boy from the local supermart. She gets caught by a neighbor who has raunchy sex with her. She falls in love with the bag boy. She falls in lust with the naughty neighbor. Husband is going to come home unexpectantly (or she loses track of time, one or the other) but the point is he catches her in bed with the neighbor and gets pissed off. Arguement ensues and he tells her it he would have been cool with it if she'd told him the truth instead of hiding it from him. Anyway he kicks her out and tells her he'll be filing for a divorce. I'm up in the air over if he will or won't get into a fight with the neighbor. (If I do I might have to add a chapter or stretch it out since I tend to write WWF style fights.) Anywho she goes running to the bagboy hoping he'll console her. He's going to console her, treat her nice take her out someplace or what not. (He still thinks he's the man in her life and he was going to propose to her.) At that point either her real husband is going to call or something else to finally blow the cover she'd so successfully kept up for so many months. In the end she is going to end up with nothing. Either that or she will go back to the neighbor who will use her as a sex toy thus giving me the option to write with the charachter some more if people like her. What I'm looking for is a few ideas to flesh it out more and what kinds of things should be added. I want to grab the crowd that is constantly reading the cuckold stories (for whatever reason) and then blasting them to bits because the women are whores. I want people to read mine and say that's really what could happen.

As a veteran, I am a little touchy about the wife cheating while he is out fighting a war (Ruby, Don't take your love to town). Cuckhold soldiers is definitely not my thing.

Ok lets have him coming home from a business trip or even temporary duty in the military.

She seduces the bagboy, he walks in and catches her, on top no less. She doesn't back up a bit, except to lean back and kiss him "Hello". Then she brazenly explains she found a new toy.

Being the open-minded guy he is, he just drops trou, looks at the guy as he steps up to her and says "Hope you don't mind if I join in, after all she is MY wife." (got to admit I saw that in a porno years ago).

Later, with her having more cum in and on her than they have left in their bodies, he chases out the kid (ok, kicks his ass) then starts your WWF fight with her.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Wow, i had forgotten I started this thread. The response to the story though has been pretty uniformly negative.

 

[3113]

Here's an attempt at a realistic cuckolding--or at least I assume it remains realistic--I haven't finished it yet.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=231977

One question regarding the cuckolded soldier story--was he faithful to his wife? 'Cause there's this little double standard that says that male soldiers, given their life threatening situation, can enjoy themselves and it's not cheating, but if the wife does the like back home it's cheating.

Just wonderin'

 

[slipfreak46]

fidelity

I understand your point. I took the story at face value. As a Viet Nam vet, I fully understand the temptations when you are half a world away.

I think it is harder on the guys that get the Dear Johns. They are depending on the emotional support of the ones on the home front. My father in law was on Okinowa (sp) after it was secure and doing clean up. Two guys got Dear Johns in his outfit. One tried to swim home, and drowned. The other ate his .45

No double standard was intended.

"If you can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with" The Spinners.

"Absence makes the heart go wander" - my wife

 

[3113]

I think it is harder on the guys that get the Dear Johns. They are depending on the emotional support of the ones on the home front. My father in law was on Okinowa (sp) after it was secure and doing clean up. Two guys got Dear Johns in his outfit. One tried to swim home, and drowned. The other ate his .45

No double standard was intended.

Oh, I do understand; though there is a difference here. I take cuckold to mean that she's cheated and perhaps is still cheating on her husband--but has no intention of telling him or leaving him. So the devistating letter would have to be from a friend...or worse, in this day and age, he might find lurid picture of her on the internet. In either case, she's might not doing any worse than he is if he's cheating on her.

If she's left him, however, well, she WAS cuckolding him, but now the divorse papers are on their way and it won't be cuckolding for long.

Frankly, the story above of a guy who gets a Dear John letter, tries (or succeeds) in eating his .45 (but not dying) and then, say, ends up in a hospital re-discovering love in say his doctor? That's the sort of story that interests me.

I mean, maybe I'm just jaded, but I've no interest in a guy who wants to avenge himself or get back together with a woman who has truely moved on while he was away. If she cheated once while he was away--ah, well, we're back to that double standard. But if it'a "Dear John," then she's gone. And if that's the case, then she probably isn't worth pursuing.

But a story about a guy reliant on a woman's love to keep him going during war time--who then gets a "Dear John" and sees no reason to continue...Ah. Now that's real damage. And how he repairs body and heart, not to mention trust in a new woman, that's very interesting to me.

Pathos, drama, tension, tragedy, pain, ressurection. I like that story better. Could even be a WWII tale if you wanted to make the new woman he falls for a nurse, or, better yet, one of the female pilots, or code breakers that were around during WWII.

 

[slipfreak46]

Deep and Profound

The only answer I can come up with on that score is that life is indeed DRAMA (to paraphrase from the TBS commercials).

Man's inhumanity to Man.

 

[slipfreak46]

Pathos, drama, tension, tragedy, pain, ressurection. I like that story better. Could even be a WWII tale if you wanted to make the new woman he falls for a nurse, or, better yet, one of the female pilots, or code breakers that were around during WWII.

Or for spice, a female spy. A kinky female spy (Fatima Blush from the James Bond movie comes to mind). It is, after all, fiction.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Depends on what you mean by "cuckold". I have to admit that the "realistic" part in the title intrigued me. Look, different men will react differently, as do different women, to the infidelity that you describe. It IS cuckolding in the old sense, though not in the sense most common (and almost exclusively presented) on this site: a double standard. I'm glad that you're not doing THAT kind of cuckold story. We have enough of those, although people have the right to write them.

There is too much cliche with the "Loving Wives" stories, for sure. The black man getting a white woman to give him everything and her short-dicked white hubby to be celibate while he provides for both of them. I turned such things on their heads in my "Angie's An Adult" story by making it clear that the husband was coerced into such an arrangement and eagerly took his revenge when given the chance. The wife is about to put in the same situation (or roughly the same) that her husband was forced to accept. It should make for some fun.

As to what you can do, well, that's your choice. A VERY realistic approach would be for the hubby to get mad, the wife to apologize, the hubby gives her a 2nd chance, she blows it, and he THEN kicks her out.

 

[3113]

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[slipfreak46]

No, it's a winter holiday--because that's what it was originally. A holiday to celebrate the birth of Mithras and/or the solstice. The Catholic Church decided artifically to absorb that holiday and make it the birth of Christ.

Biblically speaking, the evidence speaks to Jesus being born closer to the spring time when shephards would be out at night with their lambs, not the dead of winter.

It's really rude to try and force such things down people throats, especially when you do so with such historical and mytholoical ignorance. It doesn't gain you any converts or friends. And it doesn't make Christians look very Christian.

Happy Holidays

That being said, you have your beliefs, I have mine. Live long and prosper.

Merry Christmas

 

[BedtimeStories77]

The Valentine's Day story I am currently working on is about a "cuckold couple", though the cuckolding isn't the main focus to the tale... I've never lived such a lifestyle so I'm mainly writing from my own interests.

I'm hoping to keep clichés to a minimum in my story! lol