dannychellette
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If I pm'ed you yesterday and you did me the favor of replying only to find out my dumb ass left the buddy-only box checked, I apologize. Problem fixed.
Now to brass tacks (no, not brass studs on some incestuous couple's dog collar lol, jeez the subjects on here at times lol) I'm getting my shit together on a short story anthology I've been a for several months when I get home from the daily grind. Folks on this site are my market should they get into a publisher's queue by some fuckin miracle. I want some eyes and some replys on the stories. They are not exactly erotic though I must say they are deviant in a lot of respects. Love to share with YOU!
For those of you I didn't PM with the message below, here's my humble plea:
I uploaded one of 15 stories (3 pending on the site at time of this query) I am preparing for submission for publication on this site a few days ago. "Moses and Curio and the Raving Wigger." I am seeking readers for the others so as to get an unbiased opinion of them before finalizing the anthology into its final version. If interested, the synopsis of the anthology pasted below. If they are to your liking, I would love to send the rest to you. Please email me oddtunes<at>writing<dot>com or PM me back if interested and thank you!
-Daniel
Synopsis
Moses Holliday is a killer who solves problems for his best and only friend, the Cajun mobster, Bertrand “Grizzly” Fontenot. He is a hard man, reared in the west Texas desert, an ex-Marine Vietnam veteran and an occasional convict. The uniqueness of his job description has worn away with time; it is merely what he does when the phone rings him into action.
After garroting a man who has stolen from the boss, he decides to spend a day drinking in New Orleans since he has been cooped up in a jail cell for a six-month stretch. He meets a stunning young runaway named Lemarie Leblanc and against his normal character, feels oddly compelled to reach out to her.
After a long day and night staggering the festive streets, the pair hit it off unexpectedly. She has no family to speak of, never known a father, mother killed in front of her at age eleven. She has been living by her wits and body on the streets of the Big Easy, her existence flying in the face of that city’s jovial nickname.
Circumstance sends them fleeing the city together in haste, leaving all her possessions and life as Lemarie Leblanc behind. Moses takes her under his wing and confesses what he does to pay the bills. She does not shy away and in fact, falls for him.
He sets her up then as Curio Phelonie, coddles her, loves her passionately. Eventually, he still has jobs to do and leaves, often for a week at a time, to take care of a problem for Grizzly. Stewing alone at his secluded home on Flechette Bayou in the Louisiana swamp, the impetuous teenager, worried sick about losing him if a hit goes bad, finally lays down an ultimatum: This sitting at home is bullshit. I want in or I’m leaving.
Despite ample reasons not to do so, Moses trains her to kill. He does so in secrecy, since mob bosses, even his good friend Grizzly Fontenot, are not keen on their best hitmen having hot teenaged girls literally riding shotgun on business trips that could get them all the death penalty. Grizzly finds out unexpectedly about Curio and does not take the news well, but defers to Moses' judgement due to their history together. After a while, however, he grows fond of her and occassionally utilizes her femininity when particular problems need a woman’s killer touch. Grizzly’s threshold for signing a death warrant on a wayward soul is increasing razor-thin, as events in the mobster business unravel. The pair find themselves working more and more.
Curio begins to find herself sexually aroused, feeling omnipotent and fearless as she works with Moses. Whereas Moses yawns at the prospect of killing yet another person every time the contract comes, Curio embraces the feeling of power, since she has never had any to speak of. That is not to say they do not occassionally take their own lumps. Some people don't take kindly to being killed and resist the urge. Moses always manages to pull them through the harder jobs, though.
Eventually Grizzly begins to feel the heat of prosecution, age, and his past catching up to him. He begins to make plans to get out of the life and urges Moses to take Curio and get away from it all.
Moses has barely had time to ponder a life less ordinary for him and his lover when he hears of the brutal kidnapping and rape of his ex-wife, the mother of his son back home in west Texas, by extended family members of a local Mexican drug cartel’s honcho. He has never told Curio of her existence and has had no contact with them in over ten years. He chivalrously, (in his Texan brand of the word), goes back to Texas to avenge the deed, Curio stubbornly insisting to come along. He causes a great deal of mayhem and dynamites a Mexican restaurant packed with cartel members and their women, killing many, and later kills the two rapists and the cartel honcho. This puts the Feds on his trail and, by association, Grizzly’s. Though the boss had nothing to do with the attack, he tries to shield his friend Moses as best he can while trying to extricate them all from the life he fears will lead them all into a dead end.
The cartel is enraged by the attack and sends their best hit man, a sadistic pedophile nicknamed, Hermano Duermo, “Brother Sleep” in Spanish, to track Moses down. Despite Grizzly’s brutal attempts to shield all of the gang from both the cartel and the Fed’s hunts, Duermo does find them. A climactic battle in a secluded patch of central Louisiana wilderness ensues.
It does not end happily. Most bad love does not…
Now to brass tacks (no, not brass studs on some incestuous couple's dog collar lol, jeez the subjects on here at times lol) I'm getting my shit together on a short story anthology I've been a for several months when I get home from the daily grind. Folks on this site are my market should they get into a publisher's queue by some fuckin miracle. I want some eyes and some replys on the stories. They are not exactly erotic though I must say they are deviant in a lot of respects. Love to share with YOU!
For those of you I didn't PM with the message below, here's my humble plea:
I uploaded one of 15 stories (3 pending on the site at time of this query) I am preparing for submission for publication on this site a few days ago. "Moses and Curio and the Raving Wigger." I am seeking readers for the others so as to get an unbiased opinion of them before finalizing the anthology into its final version. If interested, the synopsis of the anthology pasted below. If they are to your liking, I would love to send the rest to you. Please email me oddtunes<at>writing<dot>com or PM me back if interested and thank you!
-Daniel
Synopsis
Moses Holliday is a killer who solves problems for his best and only friend, the Cajun mobster, Bertrand “Grizzly” Fontenot. He is a hard man, reared in the west Texas desert, an ex-Marine Vietnam veteran and an occasional convict. The uniqueness of his job description has worn away with time; it is merely what he does when the phone rings him into action.
After garroting a man who has stolen from the boss, he decides to spend a day drinking in New Orleans since he has been cooped up in a jail cell for a six-month stretch. He meets a stunning young runaway named Lemarie Leblanc and against his normal character, feels oddly compelled to reach out to her.
After a long day and night staggering the festive streets, the pair hit it off unexpectedly. She has no family to speak of, never known a father, mother killed in front of her at age eleven. She has been living by her wits and body on the streets of the Big Easy, her existence flying in the face of that city’s jovial nickname.
Circumstance sends them fleeing the city together in haste, leaving all her possessions and life as Lemarie Leblanc behind. Moses takes her under his wing and confesses what he does to pay the bills. She does not shy away and in fact, falls for him.
He sets her up then as Curio Phelonie, coddles her, loves her passionately. Eventually, he still has jobs to do and leaves, often for a week at a time, to take care of a problem for Grizzly. Stewing alone at his secluded home on Flechette Bayou in the Louisiana swamp, the impetuous teenager, worried sick about losing him if a hit goes bad, finally lays down an ultimatum: This sitting at home is bullshit. I want in or I’m leaving.
Despite ample reasons not to do so, Moses trains her to kill. He does so in secrecy, since mob bosses, even his good friend Grizzly Fontenot, are not keen on their best hitmen having hot teenaged girls literally riding shotgun on business trips that could get them all the death penalty. Grizzly finds out unexpectedly about Curio and does not take the news well, but defers to Moses' judgement due to their history together. After a while, however, he grows fond of her and occassionally utilizes her femininity when particular problems need a woman’s killer touch. Grizzly’s threshold for signing a death warrant on a wayward soul is increasing razor-thin, as events in the mobster business unravel. The pair find themselves working more and more.
Curio begins to find herself sexually aroused, feeling omnipotent and fearless as she works with Moses. Whereas Moses yawns at the prospect of killing yet another person every time the contract comes, Curio embraces the feeling of power, since she has never had any to speak of. That is not to say they do not occassionally take their own lumps. Some people don't take kindly to being killed and resist the urge. Moses always manages to pull them through the harder jobs, though.
Eventually Grizzly begins to feel the heat of prosecution, age, and his past catching up to him. He begins to make plans to get out of the life and urges Moses to take Curio and get away from it all.
Moses has barely had time to ponder a life less ordinary for him and his lover when he hears of the brutal kidnapping and rape of his ex-wife, the mother of his son back home in west Texas, by extended family members of a local Mexican drug cartel’s honcho. He has never told Curio of her existence and has had no contact with them in over ten years. He chivalrously, (in his Texan brand of the word), goes back to Texas to avenge the deed, Curio stubbornly insisting to come along. He causes a great deal of mayhem and dynamites a Mexican restaurant packed with cartel members and their women, killing many, and later kills the two rapists and the cartel honcho. This puts the Feds on his trail and, by association, Grizzly’s. Though the boss had nothing to do with the attack, he tries to shield his friend Moses as best he can while trying to extricate them all from the life he fears will lead them all into a dead end.
The cartel is enraged by the attack and sends their best hit man, a sadistic pedophile nicknamed, Hermano Duermo, “Brother Sleep” in Spanish, to track Moses down. Despite Grizzly’s brutal attempts to shield all of the gang from both the cartel and the Fed’s hunts, Duermo does find them. A climactic battle in a secluded patch of central Louisiana wilderness ensues.
It does not end happily. Most bad love does not…
