Rape an open thread!

[Slance]

Ok now this is going to be a searous one folks. I'd like some good writers no coments on my writing skills lol ok well it's a pretty simple one 2 gang members (Males of course) catch a woman in the dark of night coming home from her job. Now I really don't want this to become a mess not that I want to be mena but that thread about a teacher getting raped by 2 male students got pretty messed up by the end there was a janitor rear ending a nerd Ok now age looks and such are up to the person who's laying the woman so all in all theres 2 open slots left considering I'll be one of the gang members. Now there should be almost no blood spill unless totally necessay more threats to make her do things k?

 

[SexyChele]

I am tempted - but, as you said. After what happened on the "Teacher", and how out of control it got within the space of one day, I guess I'm just too leery right now posting with people whose writing style I really don't know well.

Good luck, though. I hope this one works out for you!

 

[Lord Kenshin]

I guess I'm willing.. lol.. I'll be one of the gang members.. But as SexyChele said.. I'm a little weary..

 

[PhoenixPrime]

OOC: As the gang members are taken I'll watch from the sidelines. "Good Hunting". *L

 

[Kara39]

Hi,
I'd very much like to play the victim if you can take a chance on a newbie

Kara

 

[Kara39]

I figured I should give you a sample of my writing.

Molly got off the bus and started walking down the dark street towards her house. She was an attractive young woman of 25 with shoulder length brown, wavy hair and a slender figure. She held her purse tightly against her and walked quickly, every once in a while looking around nervously. She couldn't wait to get her car back from the shop at the end of the week. She hated taking the bus every day and she hated walking home in the dark. She started walking a little bit faster, looking forward to just being safe at home.

 

[Slance]

Well jeeze actually some intreast well I guess your right Chele well mabey next time but for now hopefully you can have fun watching. Ok now Lord Kenshin I'm terribly sorry but I've got to turn you down C.G. Raven has already applied (PM) though not thta I'm critisizing you Raven (Don't mess with the good lol) but next tiem tell me on the thread so people can see but thanks for your intreast hopefully I won't make a complete fool of my self. Now Kenshin and others later on there might be room for another party to join mabey more but I think 2 is enough for now but thanks for your intereast Ok so Kara don't sweat it we we're all newbie's once heck I probly still am though hopefully I've gotten alittle better OK so lets begin oh and sorry for being so late damn connection.
IC: I Walk along a dark alley way with one of my fellow gang members. I keep flipping a Jack knife open and closed nervously thinking fi this plans ganna work hoping the bitch won't screem.

 

[Kara39]

Molly:

I pass by an alleyway and I see two men. I can hear their footsteps echoing loudly and I quicken my pace, my heels clicking on the pavement. I look around for a light, a police officer, some kind of help, but I see nothing. I pray I'm panicking over nothing.