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TheIndigoSultan

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A Midnight Dinner On A Cold Wet Night

Rain beat against the window like a never ending carwash. The wipers kept swishing back and forth diligently, knowing they were in a battle that could not be won. The sheer noise of the rain drowned out the sounds of Hank Williams Sr. coming from the old radio. Roy sat hunched over the steering wheel, staring straight ahead, trying not to have a wreck. There hadn't been anywhere to pull off for at least twenty miles and he was not about to sit on the side of the highway, waiting for some tired trucker to swipe him.

Fancy lay on the seat beside him, sleeping. Her long, black body was stretched out and her head had rolled onto his lap. She was twitching to some dream, probably involving chasing a rabbit or a squirrel. Damn, he envied her. She never seemed to worry about anything.

The inside of the automobile had grown hot and humid. Roy would feel that his t-shirt was glued to his back and to the seat and he felt like his blue jeans weighed fifty pounds. He wanted nothing more than a shower and a good nights sleep. For a moment he though about rolling the window down a bit, but he was afraid it would wake up Fancy. At least one of them should be happy.

Finally, after another twenty minutes, he saw a sign for an exit. He didn't care what gas stations, what motels or what restaurants were there. He didn't care if it was a little hick town or the outskirts of a small city. He just knew that the exit lead off the highway. He turned his car into the exit and headed down the dark, wet curve. Soon he was travelling on an old country road. He could hear the gravel kicking up under his car. It seemed like the gravel below and the rain above were trying to beat him to death. Roy sighed and kept his eye out for signs of civilization.

Down the road a few miles he spotted a dinner, or that's what he thought it was. It was hard to tell through the rain. He pulled up to the rounded, metal building and jumped out of his car. Fancy was still sleeping and probably would be for awhile, so he left her. Roy dashed toward the glass doors, but he was soaked before he even got three feet.

The interior of the dinner was well light and blessedly dry. The booths all had red, vinal cushions and tiny junk box selectors. Big glass tins of sugar stood next to bottles of hot sauce. The floors and walls were all white tiles and the counter was chrome. A few truckers sat at the bar, nursing coffees and plates of eggs. A tired old man was behind the grill, slinging hash.

Roy slide into a booth. His jeans squished under him. For a moment, he considered going to the men's room to try to dry off, but he knew it wouldn't do any good. He sighed and pushed his shaggy brown hair back from his face. He pulled his metal framed glasses off and set them on the table. His shirt was to wet to dry them on and he knew that the napkin would only scratch them. He glanced around for a waitress, but didn't see one. At least he wasn't stuck in his car, or in the rain. Roy patted a napkin over his head, trying to get some of the water out.
 
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Roy fished around in the pockets of his jeans and came out with his leather wallet. He reached into the little zipping change pocket on the inside and fished out a couple of quarters. Cold fingers feed them into the mini-junk box selector and he started flipping through the faded cards. They were mostly country, with a few rock-and-rolls tracks thrown in. It didn't look like anyone had updated the playlist since 1975. Heck, it probably still played vinal 45s. Roy settled on Patsy Cline belting out I Go Walking After Midnight. Heck, it even suited his mood. He had been out driving, trying to avoid thoughts of Mandy. Only two nights ago they had laid together on the futon on the sunporch, naked, her slim young body molded to his and her long, silky brown hair covering his chest and shoulders. Now only God and her mama knew where the Hell she was. He hadn't had a clue she was cheating on him. When she upped and left with Pete Campbell, pressed against the redneck jerk in his beat-up Ford Truck, he had still been sleeping on the porch, dreaming of her. At least she left the damn dog behind...

A voice and a small hand on his shoulder interupted his memories. The hand was soft and pale with long pink fingernails and short fingers. The voice was neither young, nor old and was a sweet and slow as honey. "Your soaked ta the bone suga'." Another matching hand appeared, holding a steaming glass carafee of coffee. It poured some into the cheap, white mug on his table.

Roy looked up and found a curvaceous, slightly plump woman standing less than a foot from him. His eyes trailed from the trim tummy, to the slightly oversized breast, covered in a baby, blue waitress outfit. From their, his eyes moved up to a hint of cleavage and a white collar. Her neck was pale and soft, leading to a round, but cute face with full red lips, a cute button nose, enourmous hazel eyes and expressive eyebrows. One of these eyebrowns was arched, as if she was very aware that his gaze had travelled upward a little slower than was strickly polite. Her auburn hair was curly and shoulder length and her name tag said Rose. He thought she was probably in her early thirties, though she might be younger. He hadn't been able to see her legs, because she was pressed up so close to the table.

"Uh ya. I sure am. Sorry, I was a bit lost in thought there." He tried to give her a smile and chattered in the process. He forced himself to relax and took a sip of his coffee. "Thank you ma'am. I surely needed that."

She snorted. "Don't call me ma'am. Makes me feel old. Probably ain't much older than you, or at least your older sister. My name's Rose." She pulled a small pad out from a tiny pocket on the swell of one of her breasts and pulled the stub of a pencil out from behind one ear. "So you just warming up, or can I get you some grub?"
 
Rose watched as the man raked her body with his eyes. She was used to this kind of behavior and on some nights she even went so far as to return the favor. She searched the mans eyes. Waiting for him to order. She smiled slightly letting her eyes close only slightly. She hoped it gave her that sleepy eyed look that most men found attractive.

"Sir? Ya gonna order?" her drawl was slow and implied. Her voice was almost as soft as silk but her definate southern accent was embelished this night.

Waiting, she smiled again. He was definately handsome. Mysterious, the mysterious stranger at table 7. She laughed despite herself. Settling in her standing posture, she waited.
 
Despite his depression, general hopelessness and totally soaked condition, Roy almost chuckled. She certainly had the all-night waitress thing down. He wondered what she was like when she was out of uniform, not having to deal with hundreds of strangers and regulars. His sister had done some waitressing and he knew that anyone who was a waitress for any length of time had to develop her act. You had to be friendly with those who might give a good tip, but not to friendly. You had to make them feel important, but do it quickly, since another table was always waiting. A good waitress could make most of her customers feel better about themselves, without luring them to stalk her in the parking lot, or start asking her out on dates.

Roy wasn't hungry. He hadn't been since she left. Still, he knew that he better eat something. He would probably be curling up with a bottle of whiskey at some point soon and it would be bad to do it on an empty stomach. "Uh, sure... My stomach's a bit off. How about a grilled cheese and some chicken soap?"
 
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okey before we continue, I know that you have a lot on your plate and if you cant continue here thats fine. I will check as often as possible and post when you like. Its not a big hurry. take your time. just let me know.
 
OCC: If I do, it is my own fault. :) I learned a lesson in patience. That is what happens when you join a new board and think no one will join your threads and create too many. This is an easy thread. We can keep going, but we don't have too. If we do, there is no hurry. I know you mentioned pulling out of Angels, so we could also put it on hold for awhile, if you wish.
 
If you like we can continue on. The pace is slow and that is good. I like the fact that it is just you and I for now so we will continue on. I will get a good rolling post soon
 
OCC: Sure. :) Take your time. Even if we only write one or two posts per week, even between us, it's O.K.
 
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