timelord1963
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- Nov 5, 2010
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Do people even notice quotes? If so, do they think an over abundance of them makes a work poor?
I am trying to fix a group sex/BDSM story that is 54 pages long. Because there is dialog between Master to submissive, Master to Master Submissive to submissive and submissive to master you wind up with a lot of quotes. Is there a way to limit them?
My main problem is separating and reorganizing my thoughts so there is just one speaker per paragraph and hopefully have my paragraphs more than a sentence or two in length. I think the story as a whole is a good one, I just do not want to destroy it whilst trying to fix it.
Any constructive advice would be appreciated.
TL 1963
I am trying to fix a group sex/BDSM story that is 54 pages long. Because there is dialog between Master to submissive, Master to Master Submissive to submissive and submissive to master you wind up with a lot of quotes. Is there a way to limit them?
My main problem is separating and reorganizing my thoughts so there is just one speaker per paragraph and hopefully have my paragraphs more than a sentence or two in length. I think the story as a whole is a good one, I just do not want to destroy it whilst trying to fix it.
Any constructive advice would be appreciated.
TL 1963