Question..

[TwiztedClown]

Beastiality is not allowed right? Cuz if it isn't we need to look at "Kirsty Cumslut"

 

[Torg]

Beastiality is not allowed right? Cuz if it isn't we need to look at "Kirsty Cumslut"

The whole story or a few threads? I only looked at the main intro, but if there are bestiality threads, kill them all or report them.

If there are downstream threads that don't have bestiality, perhaps try linking to them before kill the upstream threads.

 

[daciasdesire]

Beastiality is not allowed right? Cuz if it isn't we need to look at "Kirsty Cumslut"

Yep thats a no-no

 

[amalgam]

Why not allowed?

 

[artican]

As a general rule, Literotica doesn't allow acts that would be considered illegal in reality. I'm pretty sure beastiality is illegal in most states... I hope that doesn't come off as sarcasm because I really am just assuming this...

 

[TwiztedClown]

Well there is ALOT of threads after it...
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/6223/5580

 

[horny-oz]

Well there is ALOT of threads after it...
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/6223/5580

Sounds like it would be easier to re-write the thread then, though the credit for it wont change to your name!

 

[amalgam]

Well what about rape and incest? Homosexuality is also technically illegal in some places.

 

[TwiztedClown]

Well I think there is like two or three threads in that story that has beastiality in it. If anyone ever gets in the mood they can rewrite the thread and paste it on here for the mod to change it. It sucks cuz I get bored of things fast, and will stop doing it for a while...including writing stories . But I still check do mod stuff

 

[Torg]

Well what about rape and incest? Homosexuality is also technically illegal in some places.

I believe it is more along the lines of this:

A porn site can be charged with child pornography if it has stories depicting underage sex. I believe that bestiality falls under another law. Or the owners just don't want bestiality. It really has nothing to do with the legality or illegality of said sex acts. Rape and incest are illegal, but publishing stories about rape and incest is not. Apparently, publishing stories about underage sex is illegal.

 

[artican]

Actually, I've heard of cases where underage stories were deemed legal after it was argued that those specific stories had legitimate plot and story and could be considered literature and a freedom of expression. I'm pretty sure the terms of service rules on Lit don't allow rape, underaged sex or beastiality though.

EDIT: Yaha, found a little tidbit on the FaQs,

3. No sexual activity involving bestiality (you can write stories about supernatural beasts like ghosts, unicorns, werewolves, etc.) or underage persons will be considered. For the purposes of this site, the minimum legal age is 18. This site does not publish stories, articles, essays, or other material supporting, encouraging, or defending child abuse and/or exploitation.

So no the animals and kids. No word on forced copulation though.

 

[Torg]

So no the animals and kids. No word on forced copulation though.

Rape/NC is allowed, as well as MC, which is a subset of NC.

 

[amalgam]

So, what if I write about a demonic snake? What about a mutant elephant? I'm serious.

 

[Torg]

So, what if I write about a demonic snake? What about a mutant elephant? I'm serious.

I believe "supernatural" would cover both of these. I've read at least one story with a demonic snake.

 

[amalgam]

Yah I was specifically thinking about Kim Comes Home .

 

[artican]

So I guess someone could turn into a horse and it'd be ok. What about if I person suddenly finds a fountain of youth. I think that gets things icky, don't you? Strange thing is, I'd be more accepting of a 1000 year old spirit in a childlike form. No... wait, that's still icky to me...

 

[Torg]

So I guess someone could turn into a horse and it'd be ok. What about if I person suddenly finds a fountain of youth. I think that gets things icky, don't you? Strange thing is, I'd be more accepting of a 1000 year old spirit in a childlike form. No... wait, that's still icky to me...

There is already a scene in Aaralon's Discovery with a unicorn and two students.

 

[artican]

Ah, but there's the rub. It's a unicorn, not an everday mild mannered equestrian horse.

Don't mind me, I'm just being a stickler for the fun of it.

 

[Meach]

Constantly denied story

Hello I've been trying to post a story for the last 2 weeks but each time i send it, it shows as approved then about 10 minutes later it status converts to denied do to

Rejection Reason:
Fix grammar and spelling then resubmit Any questions or comments, go to https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21


but I've checked it several times... I can't find the grammar/spelling error that it has.

 

[Torg]

Hello I've been trying to post a story for the last 2 weeks but each time i send it, it shows as approved then about 10 minutes later it status converts to denied do to

Rejection Reason:
Fix grammar and spelling then resubmit Any questions or comments, go to https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21


but I've checked it several times... I can't find the grammar/spelling error that it has.

What's the story title? I'll try to fix it.

 

[Meach]

invisible hijinks

the title is invisible hijinks

 

[jakelyon]

Hello I've been trying to post a story for the last 2 weeks but each time i send it, it shows as approved then about 10 minutes later it status converts to denied do to

Rejection Reason:
Fix grammar and spelling then resubmit Any questions or comments, go to https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21


but I've checked it several times... I can't find the grammar/spelling error that it has.

I don't mean to be harsh but I checked the story and it has at least 12 spelling errors that could be caught by a simple spell checker. You show the POV in the story summary as 3rd person but it is written in a combination of 1st and 2nd person.

It is a good idea. Work on it some more and it will be easy to approve.

Go to www.iespell.com and download an easy to use spell checker. This will catch 95%of the errors.

Here is the info on POV's

First-Person Narrator
"The story is told from the point of view 'I,' as in Charles Boxter's "Gryphon." The I-narrator may be part of the action or an observer. As readers, we cannot know or witness anything the narrator does not tell us. We therefore share all the limitations of the narrator. This technique has the advantage of a sharp and precise focus. Moreover, you feel part of the story because the narrator's 'I' echoes the 'I' already in your own mind" (Jacobus 121).

Second-Person Narrator
"This narrator speaks directly to the reader: "You walk in the room and what do you see? It's Mullins again, and you say, 'Out. I've done with him.'" This point of view is rare primarily because it is artificial and self-conscious. It seems to invite identification on the part of the reader with the narrator, but it often fails"(Jacobus 121).

Third-Person Narrator
"This is the most common narrative style, illustrated by John Cheever's "The Swimmer":"His life was not confining and the delight he took in this observation could not be explained by its suggestion of escape" [(Cheever 2044).] Third-person narration permits the author to be omniscient (all-knowing) when necessary but also to bring the focus tightly in on the central character by limiting observation only to what that character could possible witness or recall. One emotional effect of the technique is the acceptance of the authority of the narrator. In essence, the narrator sounds like the author" (Jacobus 121).

 

[Meach]

missing notes

Thanks for th heads up I got the typos I missed before, but as for the POV difference I didi that for a reason. I wrote an extinsive note that went with the story that eplained why the introductory is in first person but he story is listed as a third person. That reason being wanted to give some leeway with the additions to it. For instance I wrote a follow up that portrays the protagonist as a man, but with the open ended intro it can easy be made into a female driven story.

Only question is where is that note that I made for it?

With that said would I still need to change the intro or could I just go ahead and write another chapter that shows the story going into a female diven storyline to mirror the male oriented one?

 

[jakelyon]

Thanks for th heads up I got the typos I missed before, but as for the POV difference I didi that for a reason. I wrote an extinsive note that went with the story that eplained why the introductory is in first person but he story is listed as a third person. That reason being wanted to give some leeway with the additions to it. For instance I wrote a follow up that portrays the protagonist as a man, but with the open ended intro it can easy be made into a female driven story.

Only question is where is that note that I made for it?

With that said would I still need to change the intro or could I just go ahead and write another chapter that shows the story going into a female diven storyline to mirror the male oriented one?

Looks like you got it cleaned up just fine as it is now approved. Now you can take it wherever you want it to go. Have fun.