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Goth Flufflet
- Joined
- Feb 24, 2001
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Would a first person "thoughts" peice with flashbacks in places be accepted?
Example below:
It brings up so many memories... Horrific, terrifying images that make me feel sick to my stomach and angry at the same time. Do you know you did this to me? Do you?
I can still hear you.
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The sound of fighting, a resounding slap, a whimper, and then silence only broken by a zipper slipping down...
Example below:
It brings up so many memories... Horrific, terrifying images that make me feel sick to my stomach and angry at the same time. Do you know you did this to me? Do you?
I can still hear you.
--
The sound of fighting, a resounding slap, a whimper, and then silence only broken by a zipper slipping down...