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Just-Legal

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Would a first person "thoughts" peice with flashbacks in places be accepted?

Example below:

It brings up so many memories... Horrific, terrifying images that make me feel sick to my stomach and angry at the same time. Do you know you did this to me? Do you?

I can still hear you.

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The sound of fighting, a resounding slap, a whimper, and then silence only broken by a zipper slipping down...
 
I don't see why not as long as it was well written

Ahem

I don't see why not as long as it meets the lit requirments;)
 
I don't have problems with it, but I'd probably have to see it in context. Check it out, do what makes you happy, then after that do what makes sense.
 
Just-Legal said:
Would a first person "thoughts" peice with flashbacks in places be accepted?
Dear JL,
Sure. Just don't forget the sheep.
MG
 
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