Question: Use of explicit vs euphemistic language...

[robertreams]

crude or. . .

Personally, I have writtten it both ways and I belive it excites both ways. What doesn't work for me is mixingthe two. However, it can be effective to use penis, vagina, etc up to a certain point and get dirty after that point, sort of a dirty word denoument.

 

[Swilly]

The words should fit the story, although care should be used. It can sound ridiculous if you try too hard to use phrases just for the sake of using phrases.

 

[HeyAll]

I've always felt that the sex descriptions are a judgement call based on the tone of the story.

If the story is on the romantic side, I'd avoid phrases like; fucking her brains out, treating her like a fuck toy, ravaging her hot pussy.

But if the story is on the sexy side, then those phrases would work well.

 

[sr71plt]

I revert to the raw occasionally for the shock effect. It seems to work OK. The language also can become more raw as the sexual scene heats up--bring a sense of high passion and losing control to the scene.

 

[Swilly]

I revert to the raw occasionally for the shock effect. It seems to work OK. The language also can become more raw as the sexual scene heats up--bring a sense of high passion and losing control to the scene.

I had the same thought. You can get a good fucking in a romance story.

 

[lovecraft68]

Depends on the characters and the story.

One of the tropes that annoys me is the innocent inexperienced young virgin who suddenly decides she wants to be gang banged by the football team.

In addition to her sudden porn star like prowess she also turns into a total gutter mouth.


Or in incest I've stories where the author did a pretty good job of trying to build a story and a plausible(as plausible as one can get anyway) reason for the mother to want to be with her son.

But suddenly once they break the ice its "How's your mother look sucking her son's cock?"

Its all about consistency.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Depends on the characters and the story.

One of the tropes that annoys me is the innocent inexperienced young virgin who suddenly decides she wants to be gang banged by the football team.

In addition to her sudden porn star like prowess she also turns into a total gutter mouth.


Or in incest I've stories where the author did a pretty good job of trying to build a story and a plausible(as plausible as one can get anyway) reason for the mother to want to be with her son.

But suddenly once they break the ice its "How's your mother look sucking her son's cock?"

Its all about consistency.

I knew girls who did just that, virgins till they left home then fuck everyone.