8letters
Writing
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My impression is that when I read novels, I see the dialogue first and any action afterwards. For example:
Occasionally, I need to have the action first in order for the dialogue to make sense. For example:
Is that okay? Should I re-write some how? Perhaps:
"Fred, stand back," I said as I pointed the gun at him.
Occasionally, I need to have the action first in order for the dialogue to make sense. For example:
When the waiter tried to hand me a menu, I said, "No thanks. We'll need only one."
Is that okay? Should I re-write some how? Perhaps:
"No thanks," I said as the waiter tried to hand me a menu. "We'll need only one."