Question for story

[Nimbikarana]

My male friend is writing some erotica and wants to write realistically about what the first time feels like for a female. Please provide some info to help him improve his story. Thnx.

 

[RawHumor]

I think you have this in the wrong forum.

[edit]Thanks for moving it here, dear Mod[/edit]

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

It was humorous... http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=263010 I wrote about it.

 

[TitianaPeaks]

Mine hurt like hell......and was so boring(we were both virgins), that I wondered, for the next couple years, what everyone thought was so fun about THAT.

 

[snooper]

Mine hurt like hell......and was so boring(we were both virgins), that I wondered, for the next couple years, what everyone thought was so fun about THAT.

Maybe you'll be lucky and find out one day, but some ladies never do enjoy it much.