Question concerning a story

[Luna_Wolf72]

Hello. This is my first foray into this forum but I could think of no better place to ask this particular question. I am working on a BDSM themed story concerning a Domme and her boy. The question is how do I go about setting a scene for forced *homosexual* activity without going overboard??

In real life, I have done this. I have taken a male pet and basically opened him up to forced feminization and bi-sexual encounters. But to write about it is something completely different. I know how I want it to be..but i have absolutely NO IDEA how to get it there.

Any and all suggestions at this point would be appreciated!!!

thanks

Pet

 

[destinie21]

Take from your real life experience to set the scene mull it over use the thoughts you were thinking and describe the sensations you were feeling ect...

It's all very easy, until it isn't

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

Take from your real life experience to set the scene mull it over use the thoughts you were thinking and describe the sensations you were feeling ect...

It's all very easy, until it isn't

Makes perfect sense destinie!! (now if only i could make it work...) I have been trying to avoid putting *me* into it as i want it to be something different...and yet in the end I guess I am gonna have to.

Ahh well

Thanks for your input

Pet

 

[Guest]

Hi Pet, and welcome. Write first in first person if it's easier, then once you've got a core of a draft see how you might redo it with a different narrator, you could try more than one til it feels right. Most likely once you start 'seeing' it through someone else's pov even the structure and style might change to suit your needs.

best, Perdita

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I suggest a different tack, take a look at some of the better writers in the non conscent, B&D and transgendered categories. See how they do it, then you can take such elements as you like from thier styles and combine them with you own expericences, tailor that to the story you are working on and you should be able to refine it into something you are happy with.

I have my own style of writing, my own way of telling a tale, but it has been influnced by many writers. Trying to take something straight from your head, and take it to paper without adding too much of yourself can be difficult. Reading a bit by writers who have done the same thing may help you figure out exactly how you wish to say what you want.

-Colly

 

[gauchecritic]

Knowing how you want it to be is the main hurdle. Now you have to step back from the hurdle and look at how to approach it.

Here's one way. Do it from the sub's point of view. That way you can have your whole self in the story how someone else sees you, which effectively makes you unrecognisable.

Any help?

Gauche

 

[wildsweetone]

Hiya Pet,

Another option...

Try thinking of somebody who has passed through your life... somebody strong, decisive, knows where they're going in their life... use them as the basis for a Domme. Ensure you do not use real names (obviously), and choose only one or two of their real traits to portray with your fiction character.

Then, think hard how the character would act, or react in certain circumstances. Put them in an awkward situation (aside from the story you are working on) and see how that character deals with the situation.

What would that character consider to be her absolute limits in forcing her boy into a homosexual situation?

Hope that sparks something for you.

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

oh WOW!! Thanks everybody for your ideas!! There are quite a few ways I can play this now and I was so close to the situation I just could not go anywhere.

I think between destinie and everyone else, I might actually get this story written!!

Great advice all. I really appreciate it!!

Pet

 

[NoJo]

As a domme, you probably know enough to write this!

Do you mean by "going overboard", making the story too unrealistic?

What would be hard is to write a straight sub being forced into fucking a guy. I don't think it's that hard to write a straight sub being fucked by a guy.

the_bragis has written some good stuff with forced feminization/homo theme. Check her stories out.

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

As a domme, you probably know enough to write this!

Do you mean by "going overboard", making the story too unrealistic?

What would be hard is to write a straight sub being forced into fucking a guy. I don't think it's that hard to write a straight sub being fucked by a guy.

the_bragis has written some good stuff with forced feminization/homo theme. Check her stories out.

You have a point. Though my problem is being away from the dominant end for too long (the *pet* has a meaning.) and yea that's exactly what I mean about going overboard. I don't wanna make it too much too soon.

and thanks for the author hint..i will check it out.