punishment...Ideas?? Male perspective

[cashmerekitten]

Hi all, I am stuck on a scene.....
the girls betrayed her soulmate...(Not yet lover), he has her chained hanging from ceiling, naked, needs to punish her for her betrayal of eternal vows/screwing other men. He is beyond angry, hurt, in somewhat of a deadly rage. Yet he cannot physically permanently harm her, nor give her sexual release as of yet, or trust himself not to screw her brains out. I need to know what a man might do in the situation. If you loved someone so deeply ect.....what would you do to her? any ideas are welcome, as I am stuck as to where the story goes till she is punished. Oh and her punishments will be spread out over a relatively long time. After which she wil be his pet/slave

 

[silverwhisper]

first, welcome to lit, cashmere kitten. i like your handle. :>

i think that a few specifics of how she betrayed the man are important, b/c a poetic punishment seems most appropriate.

did she just suck off another man? have sex with him? having a long-running guy on the side?

ed

 

[Akito01]

Taking a cue from Victorian-era erotica, there's always spanking. Perhaps it's too obvious, but it also doesn't have to be a mere slap on the backside.

There are other forms of punishment that involve humiliation or an imposition of ownership -cutting and/or dying her hair to a way HE prefers, or even shaving her head bald entirely, for example.

 

[cashmerekitten]

More info about.....

Silverwhisper....ditto on the handle I have one some place out there called the silver gypsy...
As for a bit more info...The story begins five years prior to this event. They meet online...fall head over heels in love..they both know that they are meant for each other ect....She makes a vow to love no other as he, till eternity. Yet she due to circumstances somewhat beyond her control, moves in with a man...she goes through three. During this whole time her love has not faded, she still is soul faithfull, but he does not see it that way, as he was testing her, finacially ect she was hopless at standing on her own two feet. THey still talk and write, ect as friends because he does not believe in infidelity in any way. Even if she is his, in their souls, physically she was with another. Now she is unattatched, and He's pissed, had enough and is claiming her. The start of the scene he was masked, he is no longer. she is tripping out, afraid, ect...hope I did not give the whole thing away
Your right in saying that it should be a poetic type of punishment....The one thing though, he cannnot throw her away, or take another.

 

[Carnevil9]

"ect"?

He can bring her almost to the point of orgasm, yet deny her release. Over and over again.

He can hypnotize her or drug her to believe that she is spending years and years in confinement and becoming old and wrinkled and disgusting, losing her teeth and hair and her boobs sagging to her knees and her skin hanging in sheets and never having been really loved; but all along only a few hours have actually passed.

Or... glance through a few random pages of any Gor novel to get good torture ideas!......Carney

 

[silverwhisper]

CK: thank you. :>

CK quoth
the story begins five years prior to this event. they meet online...fall head over heels in love..they both know that they are meant for each other ect....she makes a vow to love no other as he, till eternity. yet she due to circumstances somewhat beyond her control, moves in with a man...she goes through three. during this whole time her love has not faded, she still is soul faithfull, but he does not see it that way, as he was testing her, finacially ect she was hopless at standing on her own two feet.

OK, so this is true love that has gone mildly awry.

CK quoth
they still talk and write, etc as friends because he does not believe in infidelity in any way. even if she is his, in their souls, physically she was with another. now she is unattatched, and he's pissed, had enough and is claiming her. the start of the scene he was masked, he is no longer. she is tripping out, afraid, etc...hope i did not give the whole thing away.

OK, here's what i'm seeing. her "sin" was in being with other men. therefore, it would seem to me that he would "force" her to be with another man or men in his presence to drive him her guilt all the more. afterwards, she needs to be "sanctified" to make her body cleansed and worthy of him.

the progression i'm seeing:

0. (optional) he upbraids her for her lack of faithfulness. now that her guilt has been heightened, perhaps he calls her a slut/whore, and has her service a group of men, demonstrating how she has at least sharpened her whore-like skills. and this part is important: she must reach orgasm once each time so the depths of her guilt can be plumbed fully.

1. another man in his presence who takes all three of her orifices: first vaginally, then orally and finally, anally. this last one is important, esp if she and her soulmate never had anal: she is dirty, doesn't deserve his cock. her body must be cleansed of other men's seed. so this other man (let's just call him x) serves as a kind of benediction/baptism.

2. she must then watch him be serviced by another woman as the other man's seed leaks from her. this is, again, to drive home her guilt and anguish at the hurt she has cause him: he has driven him to use another woman for his gratification, she doesn't deserve him. the purity of his love must be debased now if they are to be together, two tarnished lights to be united.

3. now that she has been cleansed and he debased, only now can they be together.

now, i think that makes sense, but i'm not at all certain if this is anywhere like you wanted this to go.

ed

 

[cashmerekitten]

ty....

Thanks, never thought of looking at Gor, and I have just recently began reading about it...will check that out.

 

[cashmerekitten]

absolutley beautiful!

I do not know how I just missed this post....Yes, this is alot like what I was looking for, thank you so much!!! I was against going with others involved because of the well I dunno the word off hand....but that is great, I can just see it already....... It makes so much sense. Absolutely gorgeous. Thank you ever so much......

CK: thank you. :>


OK, so this is true love that has gone mildly awry.


OK, here's what i'm seeing. her "sin" was in being with other men. therefore, it would seem to me that he would "force" her to be with another man or men in his presence to drive him her guilt all the more. afterwards, she needs to be "sanctified" to make her body cleansed and worthy of him.

the progression i'm seeing:

0. (optional) he upbraids her for her lack of faithfulness. now that her guilt has been heightened, perhaps he calls her a slut/whore, and has her service a group of men, demonstrating how she has at least sharpened her whore-like skills. and this part is important: she must reach orgasm once each time so the depths of her guilt can be plumbed fully.

1. another man in his presence who takes all three of her orifices: first vaginally, then orally and finally, anally. this last one is important, esp if she and her soulmate never had anal: she is dirty, doesn't deserve his cock. her body must be cleansed of other men's seed. so this other man (let's just call him x) serves as a kind of benediction/baptism.

2. she must then watch him be serviced by another woman as the other man's seed leaks from her. this is, again, to drive home her guilt and anguish at the hurt she has cause him: he has driven him to use another woman for his gratification, she doesn't deserve him. the purity of his love must be debased now if they are to be together, two tarnished lights to be united.

3. now that she has been cleansed and he debased, only now can they be together.

now, i think that makes sense, but i'm not at all certain if this is anywhere like you wanted this to go.

ed

 

[silverwhisper]

i assure you CK, it was my pleasure. :>

ed

 

[silk_stockings]

Some Idea's

Just my 2 cent's worth but in her current position I'd spank her but not just on her ass. Tie her legs spread and spank her pussy, firmly but not hard and she'll get the message (best if she's shaved).

Her breasts are also a great place to spank, especially if you make her lift her tits by her nipples to allow him access to the soft skin underneith.

Perhaps if he had a small rod he could use it on both her pussy and breasts (from expeience I can tell you this works incredibly well).

Let me know of you want more idea's along these lines.