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[twelveoone]

This may be put here for purposes other than you think. One of which is often I am the sole dissenter, seeing things that others may not address. The other to counter this general impression that I am mean or whatever. If anything I'm a wuss when it comes to grading.

01/26/06 by twelveoone left comments and votes on three poems. No comments and/or votes left elsewhere.

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01/28/06 by twelveoone left comments and votes on four poems. No comments and/or votes left elsewhere

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In the above seven cases all are solid 100's
and I remind
Any attempt, directly or by inference to connect me with any anonymous activity is patently false and may constitute a libelous action.

I note with some amusement Aunty Muse had found something she enjoyed. (i'm glad) And I strongly appreciate the strength and length of the critiques
left by the Rainman and Tzara ~ I came to learn

 

[twelveoone]

Thank, you. As an afterthought, by no means should it be construed as a matter of me being "right" and anyone else "wrong". Merely a different view. If you had intent behind what you did, and I saw it, any contrary view still should be a valid concern. If you did not have that intent, I am seeing things. I am a fan of Rainman and Tzara for instance, sometimes we disagree, we are seeing different things. I learn from them. There are 10,000 ways....The possibily should be open for discussion.
For any others, that I am new to.
I am no longer defending what I say via email or PM.

 

[flyguy69]

This may be put here for purposes other than you think.
....

Here's the one I think: you're making a mountain of a molehill. Please, twelve, get over it!

 

[WickedEve]

12, why can't this be merged with your pandering thread? I merged the last public record with that thread, but you made another one. Why? Isn't this topic the same as the one on the other thread?

 

[twelveoone]

12, why can't this be merged with your pandering thread? I merged the last public record with that thread, but you made another one. Why? Isn't this topic the same as the one on the other thread?

No it is not.
1.) it does exist for my protection
2.) but sometimes I leave lame or cyptic comments, or comments that may need further explanation. Twice I had to chase you all over existence because what you read was not quite the same as I wrote. It just makes it easier for me to find.
3.)Well sometimes it is a different view
4.) Sometimes I may want to eloborate, the comment I left on yours does not do it justice. Yeh, it was that good. Maria wrote one last week.

 

[twelveoone]

and that's twelveoone.
Lets do a little thought experiment ~ an orange exactly half rotten is sitting on a table between 4 people. For the sake of illustration Fly sees the good side, I see the rotten side. We argue, the two other people think we are crazy because, until one mentions the fact is the left side that is rotten. Perfect orange, no argument, completly rotten, again no argument. This is just a binary example. The easiest thing to do is get out of the chair and take a look at the other view.
How many varibles in choices to you have composing a poem?
It's time to get out of the chair, take a look from another view in the open, what is good, and why. Always been tired of the because I said so routine; here's a few reasons.
Every writer has a code, certain patterns. Across certain styles the patterns should have some consistency. These patterns are not the same for all styles. And one of the keys maybe why, that person is breaking the pattern anyway.


Besides, don't begrudge me, my little space.

 

[Guest]

Every writer has a code, certain patterns. Across certain styles the patterns should have some consistency. These patterns are not the same for all styles. And one of the keys maybe why, that person is breaking the pattern anyway.

I need to ask you a question, 1201 because what you said above confused me.

Are you saying that when you see a poets style/form/ect, it should always be the same the next time they write a poem? I would hope not. This doesn't sound right. I may have misunderstood so could you please explain?

 

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