Public nudity story

[daisy4329]

Who likes this and wants part 2 ? . I am not a writer and havent the time to be one .What do people think?
What about this off top of my head mature lady of 40 name josie pretty with long brown hair help in ponytail is summer so hot weather goes to the beach clothed in white tshirt bra knickers and very small shorts tight black. She walks to the beach a short walk from hers feeling hot . As she approaches the beach she gets a icecream and notices a lot of people on the beach.She licks her icecream feeling it deliciously cold as she licks she gets naughty thoughts of where she would like to lick it she starts to get aroused by this thought so puts it too the back of her mind . A man who she knows taps her on the shoulder saying hi jolting her thoughts to reality. She recognisers him as a friend who she know is married but has several other partners ladys his wife knows and she is quite ok about it they have a open relationship so he makes love other loves his wife dearly but loves his lovers too . Josie has thought james his name is about sharing intimate moments with him . Josie is a nudist and a exhibitionist loves showing her body off to others who care to look she likes to take her clothes off and get naked on the nudiest beach and has thought of doing in public anyway James knows about this naughty side he asks her to go to the nudist beach with him she has never been with him there but is excited to be asked whats even more exciting he wants her to go now so she agrees ..They set off for the beach james has a bag of towels , drinks , suntan lotion they may need. James has never seen josie naked and is already forming a bulge in his pants at the thought . Josie cant wait to get naked on the beach with others and james mmm . At the beach james lays down the towels for there naked bodies josie sees the other men and women naked just enjoying the sun some are kissing each other if they want more they not allowed on beach but can go to there homes mmm .Josie starts to undress taking off her tshirt to reveal a black lacy bra she smiles at james invitingly .James takes of his shirt to reveal a hairy chest josie admires his chest feeling her arousal rising james unzips his trousers to show his bulging shape .Josie takes off her shorts and has black panties the same as bra lacy . James admires her figure and says to her i like your figure and bra and panties . Josie says mmmm feeling her getting wet as well "i like yours too" she begins to unclip her bra and james gives her a hand as the bra is taken off her breasts our cupped by james hands he kisses her neck .His cock growing we better take this elsewhere james whispers in josies ear part 2 coming up if you want

 

[Carnevil9]

I think you need to learn to embrace the paragraph. And quotation marks.

 

[LupusDei]

Indeed. For once even I have to agree, that was pretty much unreadable, technically.

From what I gathered, it's rather standard misconception of a nudist beach as a sexy place. Not that it can not be, but that's pretty much meh too (and thus needs excellent writing at least).

 

[Nezhul]

Yeah. People come to those beaches to actually swim and sunbathe, not to show themselves off or look at other people.

 

[Silentmoon]

I do love the concept, however it need to be done very well. Hitting off in the nude is really hot, but not the main reason someone would strip off at a beach or a camping. They do it first and foremost for the enjoyment and freedom of being skyclad in the nature.

 

[Hypoxia]

Don't waste time. Just take your clothes off when you dance.

 

[daisy4329]

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Yes its true the spelling and punctuaction but as im partially disabled i did quite well writing that . I have never been a nudist camp but imagine yes its more for sunbathing swim in the story they didnt intend any sexual thing they were going to sunbathe was my overactive imagination .