PUblic Comments

[sweetnpetite]

I've gotten a lot of public comments on my stories, and was recently suprised to see many added this year to older stories which is also great. But I also found that several of my stories have zero public comments and was hoping to enlist some help in that regard, if a story on the following list catches your interest, would you read and comment? I don't care about votes right now, I just would like some peak at what my stories have done for the reader.

Peak-A-Boo
Exhib/Voyeur

Raising the Bar
Older man/younger woman (teacher/student- College)

Suck Me Joe
Gay Male

Thanks so much. Public comments really inspire me to write more and to improve on my work. You guys are all the best.

Love and Lust,
Sweet.

 

[sweetnpetite]

None of the stories are very long, I'd really appreciate it a lot. Even an anonymous comment would help. good or bad. thanks.

 

[sweetnpetite]

What I look for in public comments.

I don't require a 5 vote. I'm not going to get offended or pissed or anything. I have no reason to get angry unless someone decides to go on a 'killing spree' and one bomb all my stories. I have stories w/ H's and i have stories w/ a poor showing. they can't all be winners (at least not mine) YOu often learn more from your failers anyway. Maybe they don't have comments because they are just not that good. As long as comments are made w/ intellegence and without malice, I appreciate them. The only one's I don't like are empty ones or ones that say "you can't put this or that in this or that category because *I* don't like it." Even half of those I just laugh at. It's fine if you don't like this or that in a story to say, "a, b, or c ruined it for me, but that's just my taste" or something like that. I read a lot of good stories that include elements that are a turn off for me. that's the way it goes.

This is what I like to hear:

What I liked about this story was__________
What I didn't like was______________
the story was well written/poorly written/ ect.
You need to work on______ but your ________ is good/improving/ect.
That's my fantasy!!! Could you incorporate_________ next time?
That's not my fantasy, but it was well written/ect.
This story is sick and disgusting, you shouldn't waste your obvious tallent on such trash.
You should win the Pulizer Prize for Porn!!!!!!

ect.

What I don't like to hear:

Your story sucks and so do you.
That's not what BDSM is. You don't know shit.
Learn to spell. Or at least use your spellchecker.
Fuckn retard, hw do you even no how to write youobviosly dont no shit about wat sex is supposed ot be, go wank off your cuzin and stop polluting the internet.

Actually the last one is kind of funny.

Just be sincere. I promise, I won't hurt you. Thanks.

** I would like to add that things like spelling or grammer errors I prefer to recieve in an email feedback rather than a public comment. Thanks.

 

[S-Des]

RVC'd Raising The Bar. Keep up the good work.

 

[sweetnpetite]

RVC'd Raising The Bar. Keep up the good work.

Read your comments and really appreciated them. That's just the kind of thing I like to read. YOu rock! Thanks so much for leaving a commnent. When I read through comments like this, it sometimes gives me a spark of an idea to do the next time. Even if I get contrasting input (more tenderness, more roughness, ect) I like to try different things and vary my stories, so I can always use reader oppinioins.

thanks so much. (again)

 

[nyte_byrd]

I too commented on Raising The Bar.

 

[sweetnpetite]

I too commented on Raising The Bar.

Thanks nyte_byrd. Your comments were greatly appreciated.