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[bottomsup19]

I am very new to all of this and the question that I have is how do you get a comment on a story. I just had one approved and it is the first one that I have done and would like to know what people think of it. If it is good or bad. I would like to write another one but don't know if I should or not. Is there any help at all to find out what people think?
I would appreciate any comments.
The story is in the bdsm catagory. Will She Learn

 

[Guest]

Public and private comments will come as people read it and vote on it. It would help if you posted a link to the story. I'd be glad to give it a read and tell you what I think.

Be warned. I have been known to be brutally honest. But I always try to be fair.

Write the next story. Regardless what anyone says about your first. Believe me, anyone and everyone here can tell you their first story was crap. (If they are honest with themselves) But all of my favorite authors here started with stories that were.... Not so good. They have all improved. They all write great works now. But you have to start somewhere. Gods know my first was piss poor. My last is a far sight better.

So write and improve. As long as you want to do better you will.

 

[bottomsup19]

Thank you DRANOEL for your reply. I would be very happy for you to read it and let me know what you think. You can't be to honest with me. I really need to know what is good about it and what isn't.
I don't know what you mean by a link to it. It is under the bdsm and titled Will She Learn. I am so new to all of this I haven't figured it all out yet. Thank you again.

 

[Guest]

No problem. I'll post a link to it here in a moment. A link is a clickable line of text that will take you from here directly to your story, like the second line in my signature. Though that link takes you to my profile where you can access all my stories.

 

[sailorm72003]

Bottomsup, welcome to the nut hut...

If you use the "quote" button and copy the text you'll find in this message that begins with [URL /URL], you can add it to your message and it will create the link that Dranoel is asking for.


Good luck, and as D said, keep writing, improve for yourself

Sailor


Will She Learn?

 

[Guest]

Bottomsup, welcome to the nut hut...

If you use the "quote" button and copy the text you'll find in this message that begins with [URL /URL], you can add it to your message and it will create the link that Dranoel is asking for.


Good luck, and as D said, keep writing, improve for yourself

Sailor


Will She Learn?

Thanks, was just going to do that for her.

 

[sailorm72003]

Must've hit submit as I was previewing to make sure I'd gotten the link right

Bottomsup, I just read the story, sent you feedback.

Sailor

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hi, Bottomsup. Welcome to Lit. I find that if you want comments and votes, it helps enormously if you include a paragraph at the end of the story asking for them.

 

[bottomsup19]

Thanks to all of you for your comments. It helps alot to know how to improve on my writing. Sometimes the only way to learn is to ask questions and get help from those that are more experienced. Thanks again.

 

[Guest]

Sorry to be an asshole, BP19, but I saw, 'She was excited and cared to death' at the top of the story and got turned off.

I already told you I liked you on your sixth posts, right?

 

[Guest]

Sorry to be an asshole, BP19, but I saw, 'She was excited and cared to death' at the top of the story and got turned off.

I already told you I liked you on your sixth posts, right?

 

[Guest]

See folks?

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