Proofreading needed for interactive story

[sunandshadow]

I have an ongoing interactive story about hermaphrodites. To please a wider audience I am writing the story with my preferred male pronouns but also posting a version with female pronouns for readers who prefer that. However, no matter how carefully I proofread the female versions it seems there are always some stray male pronouns or other words (man, father, brother, son) left. So I'd appreciate it if anyone wanted to proofread either single threads or the whole story and PM me any suggested corrections. The link to the story is in my signature. Thanks!

 

[sunandshadow]

I have an ongoing interactive story about hermaphrodites. To please a wider audience I am writing the story with my preferred male pronouns but also posting a version with female pronouns for readers who prefer that. However, no matter how carefully I proofread the female versions it seems there are always some stray male pronouns or other words (man, father, brother, son) left. So I'd appreciate it if anyone wanted to proofread either single threads or the whole story and PM me any suggested corrections. The link to the story is in my signature. Thanks!

Nobody? I'd be willing to trade proofreading with someone else, I just can't proofread my own stuff...

 

[DragnsFyre]

interested

I have an ongoing interactive story about hermaphrodites. To please a wider audience I am writing the story with my preferred male pronouns but also posting a version with female pronouns for readers who prefer that. However, no matter how carefully I proofread the female versions it seems there are always some stray male pronouns or other words (man, father, brother, son) left. So I'd appreciate it if anyone wanted to proofread either single threads or the whole story and PM me any suggested corrections. The link to the story is in my signature. Thanks!

Not sure I am doing this right, but I would be willing to proofread. Just contact me at nuniekat@charter.net . I only dabble in writing but have submitted a story for the 2006 halloween contest if you want to check out my writing to see if you would be interested in my help. The title of the story was Strange Love.The only thing is, I am a bit daunted with this forum so I would most likely need help accessing your story.

Kai

 

[sunandshadow]

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