Proof reading a Celebrity story

[FrenchCasanova]

Hi,

I'm looking for an editor for a story about a white celebrity involved with a black man.

6000 words to verify spelling and grammar. Comments about the structure are welcome.

It's about Laetitia Casta when she was a top model. While on a photo shoot in Kenya, she has sex with an African translator. The whole thing is described by a first person narrator, a crewemember.

.txt available

Thanks,

FrenchCasanova

 

[FrenchCasanova]

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gdtimejonny
I cannot PM you (that's what the machine tells me), check your settings.
Thanks for the quick answer.

 

[FrenchCasanova]

It's pending!

Thanks to Robert Reams, it will be soon published!

 

[FrenchCasanova]

Thanks to Robert Reams' help the first part is published.

Here it is!
http://www.literotica.com/s/laetitia-casta-pt-01

 

[LadyVer]

I don't even know who Laetitia Casta is.

Good luck with your story!