Promise

[BlackSnake]

Black man meets a white woman. For him it is love at first sight, for her it is something different than she is use to.

He lay hard and heavy dick on her.

He is separated from his wife seeking a divorce. She don't want anyone asking her to leave her husband.

When they first meet his only wants to be friends. He sees that he is in emotional trouble with her. He begs her not to flirt with him. She only laughs and continue to seduce him beckoning him to fuck her long and continuously.

She starts to fall for him. He confesses his feelings for her asking her not to hold back. To come out on the edge with him where it is scary and a long way down if either of them should fall. She tell him first he must handle his divorce.

He gives his ex-wife everything to make his divorce to happen to quickly. He has two sons one 18 and the other 17. He pays car notes for both and insurance, mortgage on the house he left and support and alimony. He put himself in a financial bind to sped getting with this woman.

He got a new place for him, her and the daughter who is the woman's #1 goal. He said that he had her back. Doing what ever it took to make sure that when she left her marriage that she would leave with her daughter.

He bought bedroom suites setup private bathroom and all for the daughter.

The time came and the woman stalled.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

True story?

Welcome back to the boards, BlackSnake.

 

[snooper]

True story? ...

Does that matter? It is a promising outline for a story.

... Welcome back to the boards, BlackSnake.

Yes. I began to think he had discovered something better than sex, though I couldn't imagine what. Then I thought, maybe he's started doing it instead of just writing about it!

 

[emap]

Hey blackie, long time no see.

I agree, it is a good set up and actually heck would make for a rather interesting series.

 

[BlackSnake]

True story?

Welcome back to the boards, BlackSnake.

Thank you sexy

 

[BlackSnake]

Hey blackie, long time no see.

I agree, it is a good set up and actually heck would make for a rather interesting series.

Yes, long with lots of drama.

Setting would be rural West Georgia close to the Alabama state line. She stalls trying to make things easier for her daughter after her divorce.

 

[emap]

You have moved recently haven't you, I am guessing to rural West Georgia close to the Alabama state line.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

*smiles*

 

[BlackSnake]

You have moved recently haven't you, I am guessing to rural West Georgia close to the Alabama state line.

Are you trying to guess?

 

[BlackSnake]

How is this for a start?

“No!” Vanessa exclaimed pushing Ryan away and jumping up from the bed. She fumbled with her panties briefly before getting them on in the dark bedroom.

“I’m sorry, okay?” Ryan said reaching for his new bride.

“I don’t like it when you go against me like that,” she said as she dressed.

“I’m sorry. It won’t happen again. I promise,” he begged.

“I don’t like hickies. I think they are slutty,” Vanessa barked as she finished dressing. “I got to go.”

“Ok,” Ryan said feeling the stone drop into the pit of his stomach. “I’m sorry. I love you.”

“I love you. Bye,” Vanessa replied as she left.

The small two bedroom apartment grew ten fold and the echoes of the silence rung in Ryan’s ears. The woman that he had married and loved so deeply was gone again leaving him wondering if it would be the last time that he saw her.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Are you trying to guess?

She's guessing what I think I know...

 

[emap]

Not a bad start.

So is she blonde? Just guessing but white women who go for black men always seem to be blonde.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

So is she blonde? Just guessing but white women who go for black men always seem to be blonde.

I'm not.

 

[emap]

Your the exception to prove the rule.

 

[BlackSnake]

Not a bad start.

So is she blonde? Just guessing but white women who go for black men always seem to be blonde.

No, she's not blonde. Brunette with very beautiful green eyes that I have ever seen. Married her and her mother gave us a house out in the country.

***

Vanessa's intensions became clear to Ryan as Vanessa's mother offered them a country home. Ryan had never really lived in the country before, and it shocked him to see a cow in his rearview mirror while he sat in his car in the driveway of what was to become his new home.

 

[BlackSnake]

This would be a very long story. Any ideas on how to shape it?

 

[Athena_e19]

The key is the back and forth of the emotional pull for each of the characters. You want to be able to repeat a similar emotion or feeling while changing its instigation in such a way that it continues to be interesting in different ways.

I'd figure out how much the husband knows, and what type of events put the woman in particular situations.

 

[BlackSnake]

The key is the back and forth of the emotional pull for each of the characters. You want to be able to repeat a similar emotion or feeling while changing its instigation in such a way that it continues to be interesting in different ways.

I'd figure out how much the husband knows, and what type of events put the woman in particular situations.

I want to show that Ryan is holding his breath hoping for the best while trying to prepare himself for the worst. Each time things workout he feels sorry for his doubts.

 

[Athena_e19]

So this woman is basically luring him along, abusing his willingness to sacrifice for her in exchange for his sexual prowess or experience.

Would he ever reach a breaking point where he exacts some sort of revenge?

Perhaps the woman continues to sleep with him, return to her husband, and he is nearly broke and emotionally wrecked, and her grown daughter recognizes how wonderful a man he is and tries to woo him away from her mother. Not an incest story mind you, but two adult women competing for the man for two different reasons.