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I just read "Profane Cunt" by Submissive Kelly. Like the tone. Gritty, but not overdone. The last line sounds a tad familiar, but bursts nicely. Some good lines that are crowded some with excess verbage. A little editing would render a solid read.
Thanks for the read.
Peace,
daughter
Thanks for the read.
Peace,
daughter