Octavian
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- Jun 17, 2002
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Judging by the feedback, a number of readers very much liked, ‘A Modern Love Story.’ Nevertheless, a few others were put off because it contained some rather long paragraphs.
The author has therefore recalled the original posting and has re-issued it in ‘EDP’ (easily digestible paragraphs) format.
Its original length is unchanged and this may still pose a problem to readers with limited attention spans. However, for those who like a reasonably well-written and plausible story, with a smattering of humour to balance some genuine eroticism, here’s the link: -
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51798
The author has therefore recalled the original posting and has re-issued it in ‘EDP’ (easily digestible paragraphs) format.
Its original length is unchanged and this may still pose a problem to readers with limited attention spans. However, for those who like a reasonably well-written and plausible story, with a smattering of humour to balance some genuine eroticism, here’s the link: -
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51798