Pretty girl falls for a plain girl

[coochie]

Jamie sees a girl with thick rim glass, long dark hair pulled back in a ponytail, loose sweat shirt, baggie jean, and canvas sneakers. The girl is obviously trying to hide the fact that she is checking Jamie out.

Jamie hadn't been with another girl in months, and the though was making her swell between her legs.

Jamie asks the girl out of coffee. She gets to know the girl and then gets an invite to the girl's apartment.

Jamie and the girl are making out and then the girl's boyfriend shows up. The boyfriend wants a threesome. Jamie is too horny to resist.

The girl turns out to be really good looking and usually go out to pick up girls for her and her boyfriend.

 

[Texguy84]

Heh, when I read the topic, I thought it was the pretty girl falling for a "plains girl", and pictured a shy bonnet-clad girl with a Fargo accent.

Anyhow, give the girls different hair colors. The outwardly pretty girl might be a redhead or a blonde, and the mousey girl would be a brunette, I think. The guy could be the barristo at the coffee shop, scouting out potentials for his girl to pick up.

 

[coochie]

The plain girl dress down and covers her good looks. She has beautiful eyes that can not be hidden. She is charming and sweet, but its a trap.

 

[Texguy84]

The plain girl dress down and covers her good looks. She has beautiful eyes that can not be hidden. She is charming and sweet, but its a trap.

Heh... thanks to Return of the Jedi, I can never hear the phrase "it's a trap" without chuckling.

Erm.. right, so back to the story idea.

 

[sirhugs]

when I read the title, I assumed it was a lesbian twist on the ugly duckling story. I already mentally cast a young Sandra Bullock or Samantha Mathis as the Plain Jane.

Not sure if the bf twist works as novelly, but worth writing.