Pretty Baby

[slyc_willie]

I know I have mentioned this series elsewhere, but I would like to showcase my novella 'Pretty Baby,' about an innocent young woman named Alyssa who follows a rapid spiral of passion, lust and love into an entirely new life.

I wrote this six-part tale over the course of a week I had taken off from work. The idea had been one germinating in my mind for quite some time, but I was never really sure just how to write it. But when my muse finally visited me, she did so in spades.

The first two chapters are already out, the third awaiting approval. I am anxious to hear what you all think of it.

Please, have a look, and give me your criticism and/or comments.

Ch. 01: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=284816

Ch. 02: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=285470

Thanks for reading.

Slyc

 

[janiexx]

Hi,

I enjoyed Chapter 2 as much as Chapter 1 and I'm anxiously awaiting the appearance of the next part.

I left a comment

janie xx

 

[slyc_willie]

Yes, I saw that, Janie. Sorry for not responding earlier. You have been very gracious toward me, and this series in particular. I appreciate your support and encouragement.

Slyc

 

[janiexx]

Yes, I saw that, Janie. Sorry for not responding earlier. You have been very gracious toward me, and this series in particular. I appreciate your support and encouragement.

Slyc

You're welcome (and this wasn't a solicitation for a thanks...)

janiexx

 

[Fibble]

love reading it..! i really like the novel

 

[slyc_willie]

Thanks

love reading it..! i really like the novel

Thanks, Fib! More to come . . . literally.

 

[slyc_willie]

Chapter Three

Chapter three has now been posted. I'm very happy with the results so far. Both chapters one and two have been hovering around 4.9 since posting. That's the best encouragement I could ask for.

In this third installment, Alyssa begins the life of a high-priced call girl, and finds that she takes to it naturally. She's always had a gift for pleasing others, it seems.

Please, take a moment (okay, maybe an hour or two) and read Pretty Baby, Ch. 03:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286237

Thanks for reading.

 

[janiexx]

Chapter three has now been posted. I'm very happy with the results so far. Both chapters one and two have been hovering around 4.9 since posting. That's the best encouragement I could ask for.

In this third installment, Alyssa begins the life of a high-priced call girl, and finds that she takes to it naturally. She's always had a gift for pleasing others, it seems.

Please, take a moment (okay, maybe an hour or two) and read Pretty Baby, Ch. 03:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286237

Thanks for reading.

Oh great!

I'll settle down some time today with a glass of vino and enjoy!

janiexx

 

[slyc_willie]

Oh great!

I'll settle down some time today with a glass of vino and enjoy!

janiexx

I appreciate that, Janie. Thanks.

BTW . . . red or white?

 

[janiexx]

I appreciate that, Janie. Thanks.

BTW . . . red or white?

Oh, most definitely red!

I'm half way through by the way...and loving it. It's like reading a really good novel I picked up in my local bookstore.

I'll read the rest tonight and let you know my thoughts!

janiexx

 

[slyc_willie]

Always appreciated, Janie

 

[slyc_willie]

Part 4

Okay, here she is, back from her heartache and more than ready for more! Part 4 of Pretty Baby is now available (and has been for a while -- I know, I've been away). Alyssa really makes the rounds in this one, which includes elements of exhibitionism, group sex, anal, and of course, Alyssa's favorite, oral sex.

But don't forget there's a story to it, too . . . .

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=287049

Parts 5 & 6 soon to follow.

Slyc

 

[slyc_willie]

Alyssa's journey comes to an end

Chapters 5 & 6 of Pretty Baby have been posted. They mark a gritty and dark turning point in young Alyssa's life.

A word of warning: Chapter 5 is especially poignant and brutal in many ways. Those looking for a 'quick stroke' should look elsewhere. This chapter of the story deals with some very trying and painful times for our heroine.

Chapter 6, however, mixes elements of both sex and story and ties together the events of Alyssa's life . . . with some rather unforeseen results.

Have a look, and let me know what you think:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288833

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288835

As always, thank you for reading.

Slyc

 

[janiexx]

Chapters 5 & 6 of Pretty Baby have been posted. They mark a gritty and dark turning point in young Alyssa's life.

A word of warning: Chapter 5 is especially poignant and brutal in many ways. Those looking for a 'quick stroke' should look elsewhere. This chapter of the story deals with some very trying and painful times for our heroine.

Chapter 6, however, mixes elements of both sex and story and ties together the events of Alyssa's life . . . with some rather unforeseen results.

Have a look, and let me know what you think:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288833

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288835

As always, thank you for reading.

Slyc

I started reading this morning before I went to work - not a good thing to do!

I finally had to tear myself away and go and get ready!

Good job I'm the boss!

Will let you know what I think later...

janiexx

 

[slyc_willie]

Thanks!

Thanks for your reviews, Janie, and the PCs you left. It's always nice to be appreciated, especially by an author such as you.

Now, if only I can get the next series going . . . .

 

[slyc_willie]

Bump

Just thought I would bump this up, and list all six chapters in one post, if anyone's interested . . . .

Ch. 1: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=284816

Ch. 2: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=285470

Ch. 3: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286237

Ch. 4: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=287049

Ch. 5: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288833

Ch. 6: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=288835

As always, thanks for reading, and I'd love your feedback!

Slyc

 

[slyc_willie]

Bump

Shameless bump

 

[slyc_willie]

Bump . . . More exposure

 

[slyc_willie]

Bump

Just thought I would bump this since one chapter of Pretty Baby has been nominated for a Reader's Choice award

Thanks to everyone who has read my series. I had a lot of fun writing it.

 

[kandie]

Ooops!!! I was putting something on Story Feedback and placed it here by mistake. So I deleted it. By the way Pretty Baby is one hot story I love it. XOX! Take a look at mine, they're so much better now that I have an editor. Hubby was good, but not an editor. I Loves him anyways. XOX Tata for now.