pretentious rubbish

[PAUL C]

I was thinking yesterday.

By Paul C.

I was thinking yesterday.
First about this, then about that.

A thought would come into my head.
To be followed quickly by another.

The more I'd try to focus on the first.
The more the second would intrude.

The more that I would concentrate.
The more I'd be distracted.

But in the end it felt so good.
I think I'll try to think again tomorrow.

 

[WickedEve]

I like the tongue-in-cheek humor.

 

[PAUL C]

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it was just a doodle. but sometimes they work.

 

[PAUL C]

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[Rybka]

Re: amendment

add 'try' to the last line

Paul, just hit the edit button of the post and you can add it yourself.

Regards,                                 Rybka

 

[PAUL C]

Apples

I come from a part of England where we used to grow a lot of Apples to make Cider. Not anymore, unfortunately, mostly it comes as a puree from France.

But the scenes you describe were much as I remember from my youth. You didn't mention the upset stomachs from scrumping unripe fruit. But the smells were certainly there.

A very nice poem.

Thankyou for drawing my attention to it.

 

[Rybka]

Re: Apples

I come from a part of England where we used to grow a lot of Apples to make Cider. Not anymore, unfortunately, mostly it comes as a puree from France.

But the scenes you describe were much as I remember from my youth. You didn't mention the upset stomachs from scrumping unripe fruit. But the smells were certainly there.

A very nice poem.

Thankyou for drawing my attention to it.

Thank you for the kind words, Paul.
GEEZ! Everybody's a critic!
You want stomach aches and somebody else complained that I didn't mention the worms! I just can't win.
(Maybe I should change my name to De Sade?)

Regards,                                 Rybka De Sa(r)d(in)e

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Apples

Thank you for the kind words, Paul.
GEEZ! Everybody's a critic!
You want stomach aches and somebody else complained that I didn't mention the worms! I just can't win.
(Maybe I should change my name to De Sade?)

Regards,                                 Rybka De Sa(r)d(in)e

hehhe... if you changed your name to De Sardine then you'd have to be a vampire sardine with black scale polish