Pretend Mother-Daughter Sandwich

[Carnevil9]

Two women are on a business trip out of town. One is older (mid fifties), one younger (mid to late twenties), but both are blonde, stacked, and good looking. They kind of look like they could be related.

They are sitting at the bar, nursing cocktails, not looking forward to a boring night in their hotel rooms before tomorrow's meetings. They talk about their husbands/boyfriends back home, and start getting horny.

Another out-of-town businessman sits down next to them at the bar. They start chatting with him. The older one coyly refers to the younger one as "my daughter." The businessman is intrigued. Soon both women are playing along with it, and before long, they are taking the dude up to one of their rooms for the famous "mother daughter sandwich" treatment.

From there, the possibilities are endless!

 

[lovecraft68]

Great idea! Reminds me of a true story you would get a kick out of.

a couple of years ago my wife and I went on a cruise. You usually get assigned seats fro dining and will sit with the same people at dinner for the length of the cruise.

The last night we ended up having to move for some reason and were now sitting with people we had not yet met.

We had been drinking at the bar before dinner and when someone asked who we were my wife kicks my foot and introduces herself and says "and this is my brother"

So now all during dinner my wife starts putting her hand over mine, nuzzling into me, flirting and the looks from around the table were priceless. End of dinner, my wife(who was dressed to kill that night" stands up, leans over, gives me a huge kiss with a lot of sloppy tongue then takes my hand and says "Come on little brother, your big sister's waited long enough and leads me from the table.

I think we may have blown it though because we couldn't help turning around and burst out laughing at the look of absolute disgust on one older woman's face.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm mostly finished with this story, I'll probably go through a second or third draft if for no other reason than the ladies are rather stubbornly refusing to sandwich and they aren't really doing what I'm asking them to do but that happens on occasion with my stories. I've got a lot on my plate right now and worse so does my bloody editor so it might not be up until after the holidays, especially if I can't get these people to stop.

 

[Totzman]

Why not make them actual mother and daughter?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Normally I'ld agree with you Totz but havint written (most) of the story it just creates a different dynamic. I've cut a lot because it wasn't moving the story for shit but basically it's kinda like improve, you don't know if the other person is gonna play along or not.

 

[sirhugs]

make mine ham and cheese please

 

[Carnevil9]

Normally I'ld agree with you Totz but havint written (most) of the story it just creates a different dynamic. I've cut a lot because it wasn't moving the story for shit but basically it's kinda like improve, you don't know if the other person is gonna play along or not.

Yes, that was exactly the point. You can't swing a used condom around here without finding an actual incest story. But here we have more of an eye-winking, let's ham this up kind of dynamic. And you still get the older/younger, first-time-lesbian vibes along with the "shall we play a game?" vibe.

 

[david_david_1234]

I would agree that a real daughter mother twist can work well be very erotic , but needs to have a slow and sensuous build up……….either the daughter as a dominant one pushing the thing forward OR the mother taking advantage of her young daughter and selling her into adult film business with her also to make money……question of ages too.

 

[RiversEdge2010]

Keep them as strangers...

I agree with the Carnevil here, the dynamic of them being complete strangers but playing along makes for a far more unique and interesting dynamic. I think its best to keep the idea of these two characters being strangers who are pretending to be “mother and daughter” as that is what makes this idea distinguishable from other, more typical incest stories (and not incest at all really). But the girls shouldn’t be so quick to jump into this “game” as that feels a bit contrived and forced. There should be a bit of a build-up into the idea of how this game comes to be that explains why these two girls would have such an unlikely threesome with two complete strangers (to them). My idea to make this story work would be this:

Maybe Sarah, a beautiful redhead in her early forties is on a cruise flying solo since she is recently divorced from her cheating husband (who was supposed to originally join her on this when they first bought tickets a year ago, her getting both of them a part of the actual settlement). Right as she’s heading to the airport, she remembers that she’s forgotten something and turns back around. When she walks back in her home, she catches her teenage daughter Rea (18+ but still in high school) giving her boyfriend, the boy next door, a topless blowjob right in the living room. She’s shocked and upset, quickly kicking her daughter’s boyfriend out and making Rea dress and go to her room. But she doesn’t have time to do much else or even realistically punish her, as she’s already late for the flight. Knowing that her daughter is just going to invite him back over, she pleads with her to please not engage in that kind of behavior while still in high school. She leaves and can’t stop thinking about the incident, even once out at sea where she’s alone. Then, one night she meets eighteen year-old named Ashley, a cute blonde who reminds her of Rea. They start talking and Ashley asks her why she’s alone. Sarah tells her about her divorce and how she came to just be alone and relax. But Sarah says she would now actually prefer a partner of some kind and wishes she had brought a boyfriend, or had even bothered dating before this so that she would have had one to bring in the first place.

“I think you just need to get laid,” Ashley says, much to her shock.

Sarah tells her that she’s shocked that a girl her age could think like that, and that she’s not the type of woman to just take a stranger to bed anyway. Then, she confesses to the incident with her daughter back home probably having a similar mindset to hers. Ashley confesses to being a sexual creature and tries to convince Sarah not to go too hard on her daughter when she goes back home. Sarah asks where her parents are and she says they’re always in the casino on board and let her have her space, and that it doesn’t bother her since her she doesn’t get along with her mother anyway. Sarah tells her to be thankful that she has a mother who would bring her on such a trip and then tells her to enjoy her time on board and excuses herself. But when she finds herself at a different bar later that night, she knows it is going to be a long and very lonely cruise. And that’s when Sarah sees Ashley with a handsome, older businessman in his mid forties, devastatingly handsome and a gentleman. He has dark hair and chiseled features that Sarah is instantly attracted to.

“Hey, mom!” Ashley says, much to Ashley’s confusion.

“It’s nice to meet you,” the businessman (Henry) says. “I’ve heard so much about you,” he tells her, extending his hand to her.

Ashley gives Sarah a look, and she quickly realizes that Ashley has talked her up to this man as her own mother (a cover that could be blown if her real parents ever bump into her on the ship). Sarah plays a long for a little bit. Then, when Henry excuses himself, Sarah demands to know what is going on.

“This guy is so hot!” she says. “And besides, he thinks we’re both hot. He says he’s seen you sulking around, and well… I thought it’d be fun to pretend to be your daughter to like, I don’t know… talk you up somehow. Then when I told him that I wanted him to fuck you, I realized I wanted him first. He told me he’d always wanted to have a mother and daughter and, well, I told him that now was his chance.”

“You what!” Sarah says, completely shocked.

But before Sarah can object, Henry comes back and quickly brings up the topic of sex. He tells her that Ashley had mentioned the fact that she (Sarah) had wanted her (Ashley) check in with any guys she planned to hook up with. Sarah plays along reluctantly and eventually gives them the key to her own sweet. She tries to leave them be, but curiosity gets the best of her and she eventually gets another key to her state room and returns there. When she comes in, she sees Henry fucking Ashley passionately on the bed. Her naked, teenage body reminds her of her daughter, and she can’t help but be turned on to think of so sexualized and exploited like this. Henry turns and sees her while inside Ashley who is screaming out his name.

“Having fun?” Sarah asks.

“Your daughter is a talented little fuck,” he says, and that’s when Ashley starts egging on Henry to go fuck her mom and starts explaining to him that she hasn’t been fucked since her divorce. Sarah tries to back out of the situation then, but when she sees Henry’s cock she realizes that could use a good fuck. She reluctantly undresses as Henry asks if she’d be willing to give him a blowjob. She tells him that it’s been years since she’s been asked to use her mouth on anyone, but that she’ll try her best. When she falls to her knees, Ashley watches her “mother” suck Henry’s cock. Soon, he is passionately slapping his cock all over her face and fucking her face. Then, he asks the question.

“May I come on your face?”

“Isn’t that what they do to girls in porn?”

“I suppose so,” he says.

“She’s never been comfortable with the thought, but she tells me all the time about how the thought turns her one, here,” Ashley might say as she falls to her knees and holds Sarah’s face in place, providing Henry with a beautiful target to ejaculate all over.

“Cum on my mother’s face,” Ashley begs Henry, Sarah not so sure what to think when he starts masturbating over her.

Once he gives her a facial, Sarah is left with cum on her face that Ashley happily licks off her, which she enjoys a little more than she admits. Finally, Sarah tells Henry that he wants her daughter to watch her fuck him, which he does happily, taking her doggy-style much to her shock… and enjoyment… Sarah finally pushing closer to having her first orgasm in a long, long time.

 

[Lazy_lay]

I agree with the Carnevil here, the dynamic of them being complete strangers but playing along makes for a far more unique and interesting dynamic. I think its best to keep the idea of these two characters being strangers who are pretending to be “mother and daughter” as that is what makes this idea distinguishable from other, more typical incest stories (and not incest at all really). But the girls shouldn’t be so quick to jump into this “game” as that feels a bit contrived and forced. There should be a bit of a build-up into the idea of how this game comes to be that explains why these two girls would have such an unlikely threesome with two complete strangers (to them). My idea to make this story work would be this:

Maybe Sarah, a beautiful redhead in her early forties is on a cruise flying solo since she is recently divorced from her cheating husband (who was supposed to originally join her on this when they first bought tickets a year ago, her getting both of them a part of the actual settlement). Right as she’s heading to the airport, she remembers that she’s forgotten something and turns back around. When she walks back in her home, she catches her teenage daughter Rea (18+ but still in high school) giving her boyfriend, the boy next door, a topless blowjob right in the living room. She’s shocked and upset, quickly kicking her daughter’s boyfriend out and making Rea dress and go to her room. But she doesn’t have time to do much else or even realistically punish her, as she’s already late for the flight. Knowing that her daughter is just going to invite him back over, she pleads with her to please not engage in that kind of behavior while still in high school. She leaves and can’t stop thinking about the incident, even once out at sea where she’s alone. Then, one night she meets eighteen year-old named Ashley, a cute blonde who reminds her of Rea. They start talking and Ashley asks her why she’s alone. Sarah tells her about her divorce and how she came to just be alone and relax. But Sarah says she would now actually prefer a partner of some kind and wishes she had brought a boyfriend, or had even bothered dating before this so that she would have had one to bring in the first place.

“I think you just need to get laid,” Ashley says, much to her shock.

Sarah tells her that she’s shocked that a girl her age could think like that, and that she’s not the type of woman to just take a stranger to bed anyway. Then, she confesses to the incident with her daughter back home probably having a similar mindset to hers. Ashley confesses to being a sexual creature and tries to convince Sarah not to go too hard on her daughter when she goes back home. Sarah asks where her parents are and she says they’re always in the casino on board and let her have her space, and that it doesn’t bother her since her she doesn’t get along with her mother anyway. Sarah tells her to be thankful that she has a mother who would bring her on such a trip and then tells her to enjoy her time on board and excuses herself. But when she finds herself at a different bar later that night, she knows it is going to be a long and very lonely cruise. And that’s when Sarah sees Ashley with a handsome, older businessman in his mid forties, devastatingly handsome and a gentleman. He has dark hair and chiseled features that Sarah is instantly attracted to.

“Hey, mom!” Ashley says, much to Ashley’s confusion.

“It’s nice to meet you,” the businessman (Henry) says. “I’ve heard so much about you,” he tells her, extending his hand to her.

Ashley gives Sarah a look, and she quickly realizes that Ashley has talked her up to this man as her own mother (a cover that could be blown if her real parents ever bump into her on the ship). Sarah plays a long for a little bit. Then, when Henry excuses himself, Sarah demands to know what is going on.

“This guy is so hot!” she says. “And besides, he thinks we’re both hot. He says he’s seen you sulking around, and well… I thought it’d be fun to pretend to be your daughter to like, I don’t know… talk you up somehow. Then when I told him that I wanted him to fuck you, I realized I wanted him first. He told me he’d always wanted to have a mother and daughter and, well, I told him that now was his chance.”

“You what!” Sarah says, completely shocked.

But before Sarah can object, Henry comes back and quickly brings up the topic of sex. He tells her that Ashley had mentioned the fact that she (Sarah) had wanted her (Ashley) check in with any guys she planned to hook up with. Sarah plays along reluctantly and eventually gives them the key to her own sweet. She tries to leave them be, but curiosity gets the best of her and she eventually gets another key to her state room and returns there. When she comes in, she sees Henry fucking Ashley passionately on the bed. Her naked, teenage body reminds her of her daughter, and she can’t help but be turned on to think of so sexualized and exploited like this. Henry turns and sees her while inside Ashley who is screaming out his name.

“Having fun?” Sarah asks.

“Your daughter is a talented little fuck,” he says, and that’s when Ashley starts egging on Henry to go fuck her mom and starts explaining to him that she hasn’t been fucked since her divorce. Sarah tries to back out of the situation then, but when she sees Henry’s cock she realizes that could use a good fuck. She reluctantly undresses as Henry asks if she’d be willing to give him a blowjob. She tells him that it’s been years since she’s been asked to use her mouth on anyone, but that she’ll try her best. When she falls to her knees, Ashley watches her “mother” suck Henry’s cock. Soon, he is passionately slapping his cock all over her face and fucking her face. Then, he asks the question.

“May I come on your face?”

“Isn’t that what they do to girls in porn?”

“I suppose so,” he says.

“She’s never been comfortable with the thought, but she tells me all the time about how the thought turns her one, here,” Ashley might say as she falls to her knees and holds Sarah’s face in place, providing Henry with a beautiful target to ejaculate all over.

“Cum on my mother’s face,” Ashley begs Henry, Sarah not so sure what to think when he starts masturbating over her.

Once he gives her a facial, Sarah is left with cum on her face that Ashley happily licks off her, which she enjoys a little more than she admits. Finally, Sarah tells Henry that he wants her daughter to watch her fuck him, which he does happily, taking her doggy-style much to her shock… and enjoyment… Sarah finally pushing closer to having her first orgasm in a long, long time.

I think this is good, but it's not plausible that you have the guy fucking the girl, then getting blown by the mom, then fucking the mom all in a brief tryst. Unless he's got incredible stamina. That's one angle, but it shifts the focus on the guy, instead of the mom.

Here is the way I'd call it. Daughter is the main actor not the guy.

...daughter is on top of the guy, riding him cowboy style. All she lacks is the hat....

Fuck yeah, give her a black cowboy hat. It contrasts nicely with her tanned body. Reader sees the image strongly. That's how mom sees her when mom opens the door and admires her lithe, squirming young body.

Daughter was hornier than heck, came really early. Guy had done oral on her first, and she got off like a rocket on his penetration in the fuck. As she's recovering, still too sensitive to like his thrusting, and mom walks in.

There's her chance. Daughter pulls out and stands up, leaving his cock up in the air looks at him and whispers "Fuck mom. Fuck my mom. Use your long hard cock on her like you did on me." She gently grabs "mom" by the shoulder and brings her nearer. "Mom" feels the girl's hand still trembling from the orgasms. Maybe the girl has another mini orgasm as she says the words, the idea of playing mom and daughter turns her on that much. "Mom" sees it happening and is really moved into a state of raw sexual tension.

Girl starts to slowly, lovingly strip mom. Girl kisses mom, first a little bitty kiss, then maybe really passionately. (could go lez at this point) (for humor, girl touches Mom's clit, Mom starts screaming...she's a screamer lol..., girl puts hand over her mouth, then they all collapse laughing...)

Guy passively waits...in total awe....

LOL....

 

[Sean Renaud]

http://www.literotica.com/s/momma-bird

 

[Carnevil9]

http://www.literotica.com/s/momma-bird

Excellent!

 

[Sean Renaud]

There is a second chapter pending and there was supposed to be a third but my muse ever so politely told me to eat a dick about midway through.

 

[Carnevil9]

More chapters would of course be fun and spank-worthy, but not necessary from a story-telling standpoint. The conflict (will Lacey do it or won't she?) has already been resolved.

Of course, future chapters could resolve further conflicts, such as how the husbands will react. And how Alejandro might react to finding out they aren't really related.

 

[Hypoxia]

We had been drinking at the bar before dinner and when someone asked who we were my wife kicks my foot and introduces herself and says "and this is my brother"

During one of my spasms of marriage, my then-spouse and I (both tall dark sharp-featured folk) were often mistaken for siblings, even by cow-orkers and naive friends. We had groping-good fun with that. Alas, we were exclusive, and didn't make any libido sandwiches.

Sometimes I was out partying with an actual sibling who didn't look much like me, and we were mistaken for a couple. We were almost tempted to drag in outsiders for three-way sessions. It just never quite happened. Darn.

And I had a best friend who almost looked like my twin. We *did* sometimes get a group scene going whilst claiming to be siblings. Our targets were always excited at the prospects of doing the two of us. Hot damn, twins!

But I haven't tried any parent-child impersonations. None that I can talk about, anyway. Well, there was one time...

I guess I should write these stories, with appropriate disguising of identies, etc.

 

[PrettyLilPussy]

VERY SEXY!!

that is all

 

[lovecraft68]

There is a second chapter pending and there was supposed to be a third but my muse ever so politely told me to eat a dick about midway through.

Oh, man that had me laughing my fucking ass off!

I've just always envisioned it as the muse rolling her eyes and slamming the door in my face.

I ill be sure to keep my mouth shut around it from now on.