Pov

[NoJo]

If anyone has noticed my posts getting a little more strident and nasty recently , Dr Yekkl and Mr Hyde explains all. It's all true, names changed slightly.

I tried to write this story from a submissive womans POV, but gave up, because she wouldn't get out of the way to let me get a look.


By the way, the title of the story is actually a clever play on words: The story is based on a famous story called "Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde".

Please make sure that you send me feedback. If you're not sure what to say in your feedback, I've provided a handy template below:
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Dear Sub Joe,
What fun I had reading that story. I laughed my head off, will send head via UPS next week. PS why did you not say she had a big ass, I would have much preferred it if you said how big her ass was, particularly if it was a very big ass, which is the size I like.
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[ronde]

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Dear Sub Joe,
What fun I had reading that story. I laughed, but my head didn't fall off (neither one, thank God). Actually, it was more of a hysterical chuckle, but I did spill my beer. Will send picture of chuckling head via email next week anyway. I need to keep my real one, 'cause it's the only one I have and my wife needs the ears to yell into. PS why did you not say she had big boobs, I would have much preferred it if you said how big her boobs were, particularly if they were very big boobs, like 66 QQQQ, which is the size I like.

(Well, you said it was a handy template)

I'm not a femsub, but I do like coffee. If I promise that I voted you a "5" will you promise not to track me down?

Keep writing more of this stuff. It doesn't get me off, but you didn't make any splleing errors and your grammor is godo.

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[Octavian]

Sub Joe

I've already sent you this via private feedback but on reflection your story is so good it merits public acclaim.

"I don't know what you do for a living but you ought to be making money out of this. It's brilliant, honestly. I love your humour. Another rock solid 5.
What more can I say, except don't stop writing."

 

[Guest]

Wonderful!

Loved it - chortled all the way through.

PS - why did you not say he had a big dick, I would have much preferred it if you said how big his dick was, particularly if it was a very big dick, which is the size I like. (Oh, wait, you did, 18 inches in the subtext - ok - never mind)

 

[pinklipstick]

ROTFLMAO!!!!

Oh dear God, I needed that!