Posting to Literotica

[Thornhiedevil]

Heyhey,

It's me, lol. Erm I was wondering if there was anyone out there who would be interested in taking a look at a story of mine, before I attempt to post it. I think there are a few things that need working out, can someone advise me on what needs done?

Thorners

 

[bisexplicit]

Theres a volunteer editing program on lit. And heres the link: http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/voled_stor.shtml

 

[Thornhiedevil]

Thanks,