Posted my first story and finished 2nd Ch. I'd love feedback

[GentlemanT]

The first installment of my first story "Florida Cougar" is posted [http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=465086] and I would be interested in getting feedback from readers. I am especially eager for feedback from women with a penchant for dating younger men. While very little in the story is anything but wild fantasy, I am interested in hearing what might appeal to them as readers and if they feel the description of the female protagonist is a fair description of a sexual, beautiful woman in her fifties.
Look forward to hearing everything.
Gentleman T