post your unaccepted stories here.

[lilguy]

sense its may be a while.

 

[lilguy]

here a one where you go back in time to your high school to relive your highschool years and make them better and find the girl you miss. Later you can go back in fourth in time. It like the butterfly effect where everything you do changes thing. Fuck a girl without a condom and you may find youself living in a trailer park with 8 kids.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2316



Amazon story. Some of you guys may not be into it. So if not move on
mega guy worst worst superhero

 

[fanficnut]

These stories are "somewhat" in the vain of create a fembot but with much better nagavation. I added a links sections and premade charcter section on the wrestling one. I also added premade storyline sections.


So hopefully this won't be as confusing. I read the critiques and hopefully will fix them.


This is The ultimate Fanfic. Will basicly make everyone a trusted user again who adds. Vr program that give you many differnt fanfiction. Be it Comics, cartoons, or TV. Or stuff people normaly don't make fanfic about like famous adult comics (cherry,Horny biker chicks,verotika,eros comix, Super Taboo) or novels. Also still will check my trusted users because before SOME did some crazy shit. Got a lot of one sentence stuff last time.

Ultimate fanfiction


I got the idea for this next one when playing WWE smackdown. The create a wrestler mode inspired me. The idea is mix sex fighting. You know the drill. The first person cum wins. What the idea is it's in 3rd person if it a woman. You can create a woman and then pick if she bad or good and what belt she after. Or you can pick your tag team partner if your a guy. The story explains it better. Basicly the idea is you can create wild gimmiks for characters and storylines.

MSWF- mixed sex wrestiling federation

 

[jakelyon]

I have a couple

I had three stories waiting to be approved, but two of them have disappeared?? I guess I know why they never received approval. I guess I will have to resubmit them. They were called, "Cheating on my wife," and "What Money will buy"


This one is still out there:

My Wife's Little Sister

 

[gizmoo69]

Here's my one. Its called 'Fun with the Family', but is NOT an incest story (I don't want people to be discouraged from reading it). It's about a guy (you) who goes to his girlfriend's house and basically ends up fucking her mum and sister as well! Pretty straightforward I think.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2384

Any comments/new threads would be appreciated.

 

[jakelyon]

The other two

Here are the other two that I am waiting on:

Cheating on my wife

and

What money can buy

Give them a preveiw and let me know what you think. Maybe someday they will get approved!

 

[fanficnut]

just found out you can add to theses.

So if anyone can please do.

 

[The_high_king]

I got an unaccepted story right here! I already started a thread about it in this forum, but hey, I could use the publicity. Check it out, it's about this guy who time travels into the past to score beautiful ladies from history, ladies like Amelia Airhart, Helen of Troy, and more. Here's the link:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2455

 

[fanficnut]

why not add to me King

If you do ladies will like you.

 

[fanficnut]

also how the heck are you making more then 4 choices

I havent figured out that trick without somoene else adding a more then choices befor I accept it

 

[The_high_king]

I think I did when I made a new option, then clicked 'Continue Thread', before the page finished loading many times. Try that.

By the way, added a lengthy post to your story.

 

[fanficnut]

thanks give it a try

on my story

which surprise LINKED HERE

 

[The_high_king]

Your most welcome. So, anyone else here interested to adding to my story? ... or maybe fanficnut's story... which is 'almost', as good as my story.

 

[fanficnut]

thanks for adding

GREAT IDEA
never even thought of it. I see you watch wrestling. I was affraind nobody would get the lingo. I tend to make people trusted user on these type of stories and let them add when ever they want. I do check to edit but all ways ask before I do

So king if you want to add for now on it's automatic

 

[The_high_king]

Very cool! So I see you like the 'Super Ref' then. Alright, if you can also add something lengthy to my thread, I'll promote you also. Therefore, we'll both be even.

 

[fanficnut]

here the link to the thread he added

sense it hard to find

I will add something of lenghth but take a bit sense got to proof read it because well...

You know how I am

 

[The_high_king]

Added another post to your story. This time, a 'heel'. Anyways, I hope that the business in my thread picks up soon. In fact, I hope business in CHYOO picks up fast, PERIOD.

 

[fanficnut]

thanks add something tommarow or actully tecnicly today this afternoon

sense it midnight

 

[madcap902]

Well here's mine...I've put quite a bit of work into this one...not lately...just back when I first started writing it...One of this links is messed up...and I guess I'm going to have to wait for them to approve it to fix it. But anyways, it's my first story I've ever put up in public so here you go

My Story

 

[jakelyon]

Well here's mine...I've put quite a bit of work into this one...not lately...just back when I first started writing it...One of this links is messed up...and I guess I'm going to have to wait for them to approve it to fix it. But anyways, it's my first story I've ever put up in public so here you go

My Story

I noticed that your story was closed so no one else can add to it. Was that your intention? If so why?

 

[lilguy]

well the guidlines said don't add.

So I guess it was on purpose. He just wants to guide you on an adventure. Which is cool.

Oh made 2 more
yea I know. But I was bored. It my last one's under lilguy though.

This is a prequel. This staring the older ladies who in a lot of my stories. It the last of them. That why I am getting rid of these old bitches ounce and for all but I telling there story as teenagers. I actully GASP trying to make charcter development here. Takes place during the 60's. Check it out it may surprise you. So please tell me what you think.

here they go again

This one next is the Good boy 3. The last story staring my very own Mary sue Chris. He leaves the nest and go on in the world to the city but he still run into wild women there. He a bit older in this one and more taught in sex. This one a last smut horray.

good boy 3

 

[The_high_king]

Liking both stories. Good way to renew... stuff. Anyways, I'm looking for someone add some new historical ladies to my Thread, since I ran out of 'Add Option' options. I need an Amelia Airhart option, Pocahontas option, and maybe a Maid Marion, (from the Robin Hood legend), option. Oh, and uh, if I'm asking to much there, just add something to me thread if you guys can alright? Anyways, here's the link again:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2455

 

[fanficnut]

ummm how is that possible with out an add option. Where do we add

 

[The_high_king]

ummm how is that possible with out an add option. Where do we add

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Oh... well... I see, okay. That can be a problem. Ehh, don't worry about then. Amelia is already in the orgy option section. Anyways, just... add to my thread then guys.

 

[madcap902]

I noticed that your story was closed so no one else can add to it. Was that your intention? If so why?

Like lilguy said...I'm just enjoying writing something on my own