Possible story idea

laffalot

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Okay, this idea started out as an image in my twisted brain, but perhaps with some creative imagination, the right author could turn this into a story. I was watching a show one night that had a woman standing in front of elevator doors, waiting for the elevator to arrive. I had a vision of the doors sliding open, and the woman -lets call her Amy- seeing a shocking sight. On the floor of the elevator is a semi-conscious nude woman, her legs splayed wide open to show her freshly fucked cunt. She is covered in an enormous amount of semen, with it leaking out of her mouth, anus and pussy. Also on the floor is her clothes, which are torn to shreds.

In my vision, Amy fears that the woman in the elevator has been gang-raped, and rushes in to help. She tells her that she is calling the police, but the cum covered woman begs her not to call the police. So here's where I'm not sure how to proceed. I've played with different scenarios, but maybe someone with a fresh perspective could make it into something worthwhile. I thought that maybe the mystery woman could be some kind of succubus or sexual vampire who drained a group of men in the elevator, then sent them stumbling away, nearly catatonic. Intoxicated by the copious amounts of cum that she binged on, the demon is weak, and allows Amy to help her until she gains her strength back. Of course it wouldn't take long, and then she would feed on the unsuspecting Amy, putting the once straight woman through the most intense lesbian sex, and leaving her in a coma.

That's one possibility, but I'd love to hear more ideas from the brilliant minds that frequent these hallowed halls. I actually started to write this, but I've got so many stories in the works right now that I can't focus on another one just now.

Does anyone else think that this has potential? I'd love to hear any other ideas and see someone run with it.
 
I'm not really seeing much story here. This sounds like the punch line at the end of a comedy sex scene. That's not saying there is anything wrong with it but it just doesn't seem like a starting point so much as an ending.
 
This sounds almost like the first 10 minutes of the first episode of Lost Girl...a Canadian series about a succubus. From what I remember the girl does not even know she's a succubus, thinking she's been cursed and ends up "sucking" the life out of a guy in an elevator...

The cops are also supernaturals who recognize a succubus' kill...


Anyways, back to the original post, interesting concept. Maybe the woman who finds her ends up being her "Renfield." The demon/succubus/vampire is always drained/susceptible after a binge feeding, and the woman becomes so enamored with her she protects the demon after each feeding, maybe participating initially to gain more victims...
 
Could it be a mobile gloryhole elevator? Riders have sex with random people on various floors.
1st Floor - Blowjobs
2nd Floor- Fingering
3rd FLoor - Vanilla sex
4th Floor - Anal sex
5th Floor - Anal sex while sucking cock
6th Floor - Deepthroat
7th Floor - Fisting
8th Floor - Double penetration


Just a thought
 
The vampire thing came out of nowhere.

But if you're looking for a supernatural angle, how about she was cursed by a witch where she MUST have her newfound crazy sexual desires met. Kind of like the movie Crank, but with sex.

Before that she was an uptight bitch.

Perhaps Amy ends up helping the woman, but is reluctant about it because it's creepy.

It could be a story for the Halloween contest.
 
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