RicoLouis
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Okay, posting a rough draft of a story I wrote to get a little feed back. It is one of a series of stories I have stuck in my head. Each story would be told from a seperate pov. I still need to find an editor and all before I can put it up on the site. Please tell me what you think and if you would like to see more.
Tuesday July 21st 2009
“So when are you going to tell me?” Elizabeth’s younger sister Rebecca asked as she walked into the room carrying two cups of coffee handing one to Elizabeth. Elizabeth took it trying not to disturbed the infant suckling at her left teat.
“Tell you what?” Elizabeth took a deep whiff of the coffee before blowing on it and taking a sip of the coffee as she looked at her sister.
“What’s wrong with you? You have been depressed or something all week.” Rebecca made her self comfortable on the couch next to her sister as she turned sideways to face her.
“Its nothing Becky.” Elizabeth took another sip of her coffee as she looked down at her baby. Truth be told something was bugging her. Something she didn’t even know if she could tell her sister.
“Oh come on Beth, I know you better then that,” Rebecca said grinning as she ran her finger around the rim of her coffee cup.
“It’s just.” Elizabeth took a deep breath looking down at her coffee as she swirled it lightly in her hand. How could she tell her she thought.
“Did something happen between you and Greg?” Rebecca asked taking a sip of her own cup of Joe.
“No.” She shook her head.
“Then what? I mean what could be so bad you can’t tell your own sister?” Rebecca asked with a grin. Heaven knows she had kept secrets for her before.
“Okay I will tell you but you can’t tell a living soul about it.” Elizabeth took a deep breath as she laid her head back thinking of last Friday when it had happened.
Saturday July 18th 2009
“Well this is my stop,” Elizabeth said to her sister as the cab pulled up to her blue suburban home.
“Good night bitch.” Rebecca leaned over and gave her sister a peck on the lips. They where both more then tipsy from there girls night out. Elizabeth stumbled out of the cab and closed the door making her way up the driveway. She smiled seeing her husbands car in the driveway. She was certainly in the mood for a little fun.
She let herself in through the kitchen door from the driveway and tossed her keys on the kitchen counter along with her purse and shoes. She would worry about them in the morning she thought. She made her way upstairs and to her room staggering a little as she went.
She opened the door slowly and closed it back the same before walking over to the crib where the baby slept. She smiled down at her little girl who was fast asleep. She had finally started sleeping throughout the night allowing for nights like tonight. She looked over at the bed. Her husband was barley visible from the dim light of the baby’s mobile. She grinned as she reached back and undid her dress and did a little shimmy letting it fall to the floor. Then she did the same to her bra as her nice milk filled tits popped out she let out a little sigh. It felt so good to get that damn thing of sometimes. Especially since she hadn’t breast feed since she had left the baby with her son.
She slowly climbed into bed. Crawling towards her husband. Placing her hand on his stomach and running her hand downwards, sliding into the sweat pants he was wearing. She stopped as she felt his cock. Damn it seemed so big tonight. Even bigger then normal. She fought it free of his pants filling it with both hands.
“Damn baby.” She whispered. His penis was so engorged tonight, she could fill her pussy moisten just by holding his huge rod. She smiled as she leaned over him and slowly parted her lips kissing the head of his cock lightly. Slowly her lips parted as she playfully suckled the head. Her tongue began to lick at the small opening of the head teasingly. Then around the head coating his throbbing penis head. She pulled it from her mouth as she begins to lick at it with her tongue. Her free hand reached down and began to rub her own nipple as she pinched at it lightly mashing the soft button between her fingers as a few drops of breast milk meet her hand. She began to tug at it sending the sensation of pleasure and pain throughout her body.
She could fill him steer a little as she ran her tongue down his penis to little spot at the bottom of his head where it meets the shaft, teasing it with her tongue. Then down his shaft tracing the thick vein of his cock with her tongue and then she ran it back up. She began to lick back at his head before popping into her mouth slowly sucking on it taking more and more of him into her mouth with each sucking motion. Her own hand was now twisting her dripping nipples. Her clit was throbbing as she rubbed her thighs together. Her panties soaked with her juices.
She had about half of his dick in her mouth when she felt him sit up. She grinned to herself as she reached up slowly with her hand and began to caress his balls. She felt his body shift lightly and the light came on. She looked up to see her son.
“Mom.” Johnny looked down at her with a look of shock on her his face. She quickly pulled his cock from her mouth as she sat up her eyes wide. What had she done she thought.
“Oh crap Johnny.” She said as she looked down at her own naked body quickly covering her naked breast with her arm. Johnny quickly grabbed a pillow covering his own hard cock.
“What are you, why are you in are bed, where is Greg?” She began to fire of questions as she looked away unable to look him in the face after what she had just done.
“I don’t know. I feel asleep watching Jessica.” he said from behind her. She could fill him moving about. No doubt to put his huge cock away. Damn she couldn’t get it out of her mind or what she was just doing to it.
“Shit, Greg is going to kill me.” She hung her head and ran her fingers through her hair taking a deep breath.
“Mom, its okay.” She felt his hands touch her shoulders as it put a sheet over her.
“No its not.” She grabbed the sheet pulling it over her naked body.
“Mom. It was an accident.” He began to rub her shoulder lightly.
“I…” She closed her mouth not knowing what to say and sat there as his strong hands rubbed her shoulders trying to comfort her. But the alcohol made his touch seem more like agony. She wanted to turn around and fuck him. Damn, what was she thinking.
“Mom, I am not going to tell anyone. Why don’t you go to bed.” He said as he rubbed her shoulders one last time as he leaned over toward her and kissed her lightly on the cheek. “Good night mom.” he stood up and exited the room and headed out into the hallway but not before looking back one last time. She saw something in his eyes, at least she thought she had. He closed the door slowly and then he was gone. She sat there for a few seconds. The taste of his cock in her mouth.
Tuesday July 21st 2009
“Oh Shit…” Rebecca sat there with her hand over her mouth. Elizabeth looked down at the cup of coffee she had been nursing while telling her sister what had happened.
“So what did you do afterwards?” Rebecca sat back, a grin playing on her face.
“I went and took a shower,” Elizabeth said.
“And where was Greg at?” Rebecca asked taking one last gulp of her coffee, setting the cup down on the coffee table.
“He fell asleep in his office. Johnny went and woke him up,” Elizabeth said. Luckily she hadn’t had to see him much that night since he had been asleep by the time she got out of the shower.
“So he was right down the hall while you where sucking your son.” Rebecca let out a small laugh as a smile crossed her face.
“Its not funny.” Elizabeth mouth went wide at her sister laughing at her. She set her cup of coffee down on the side table and tossed a throw pillow at her. The baby startled a little from the commotion but not enough to wake up or let go of the teat in her mouth.
“It is a little. Come on sis it was an accident you can’t blame yourself. You where pretty wasted the other day.” Her sister leaned over and rubbed her shoulder.
“That’s not what is bothering me.” Elizabeth let out a deep sigh.
“Then what is it?” Rebecca asked as she rubbed her sisters shoulder lightly.
“Nothing your right.” She faked a smile at her sister.
“Well, I guess I better get going if I am going to go to work. Rebecca leaned over and gave her a kiss on the cheek. “Later slut.” She quickly whispered in her ear.
“Bitch.” She pushed her sister away as they both laughed a little. It felt good to laugh Elizabeth thought to herself.
“So how well hung is he?” Rebecca asked as she stood up.
“What?” She felt caught off guard by her sisters question her face turning a little red.
“How big was his cock?” Rebecca teased as she grinned.
“That’s my son your talking about.” Elizabeth stood up slowly trying not to wake the baby as her sister helped her.
“Come on you said he felt huge. How huge was he?” She stood there grinning as she crossed her arms. Elizabeth knew she was going to bug her until she told.
“I will just say if his dad was hung like that I would have never divorced him.” A smile crossed her face thinking about her ex-husband Frank. He was a real asshole but he was damn good in bed, mostly other peoples. She missed his large cock sometimes. Not that Greg wasn’t well hung. But Johnny put them both to shame.
“That big, Huh?” A small smirk played across Rebecca’s face. She had accidentally walked in on Frank once and had always teased her sister about it.
Elizabeth saw her sister out and headed up stairs to put the baby down who had seemed to have had her fill of milk. She sighed as she took a deep sigh and headed to her sons room. She opened the door slowly peeking in to see him laying on the bed still asleep. He had taken to sleeping in, no doubt enjoying his last summer before he left for collage. She bite her bottom lip as she noticed the bulge within his sweat pants. She wanted to sneak into his room to see it again, She didn’t know why, but she had fantasized about her son ever since that night. She had felt awkward around him though she had managed to hide it. Neither one of them had talked about that night since. She had no idea if he shared the same feelings as she did not that she would or even could ask. She sighed as she slowly she closed the door and decided she needed a nice cold shower.
Tuesday July 21st 2009
“So when are you going to tell me?” Elizabeth’s younger sister Rebecca asked as she walked into the room carrying two cups of coffee handing one to Elizabeth. Elizabeth took it trying not to disturbed the infant suckling at her left teat.
“Tell you what?” Elizabeth took a deep whiff of the coffee before blowing on it and taking a sip of the coffee as she looked at her sister.
“What’s wrong with you? You have been depressed or something all week.” Rebecca made her self comfortable on the couch next to her sister as she turned sideways to face her.
“Its nothing Becky.” Elizabeth took another sip of her coffee as she looked down at her baby. Truth be told something was bugging her. Something she didn’t even know if she could tell her sister.
“Oh come on Beth, I know you better then that,” Rebecca said grinning as she ran her finger around the rim of her coffee cup.
“It’s just.” Elizabeth took a deep breath looking down at her coffee as she swirled it lightly in her hand. How could she tell her she thought.
“Did something happen between you and Greg?” Rebecca asked taking a sip of her own cup of Joe.
“No.” She shook her head.
“Then what? I mean what could be so bad you can’t tell your own sister?” Rebecca asked with a grin. Heaven knows she had kept secrets for her before.
“Okay I will tell you but you can’t tell a living soul about it.” Elizabeth took a deep breath as she laid her head back thinking of last Friday when it had happened.
Saturday July 18th 2009
“Well this is my stop,” Elizabeth said to her sister as the cab pulled up to her blue suburban home.
“Good night bitch.” Rebecca leaned over and gave her sister a peck on the lips. They where both more then tipsy from there girls night out. Elizabeth stumbled out of the cab and closed the door making her way up the driveway. She smiled seeing her husbands car in the driveway. She was certainly in the mood for a little fun.
She let herself in through the kitchen door from the driveway and tossed her keys on the kitchen counter along with her purse and shoes. She would worry about them in the morning she thought. She made her way upstairs and to her room staggering a little as she went.
She opened the door slowly and closed it back the same before walking over to the crib where the baby slept. She smiled down at her little girl who was fast asleep. She had finally started sleeping throughout the night allowing for nights like tonight. She looked over at the bed. Her husband was barley visible from the dim light of the baby’s mobile. She grinned as she reached back and undid her dress and did a little shimmy letting it fall to the floor. Then she did the same to her bra as her nice milk filled tits popped out she let out a little sigh. It felt so good to get that damn thing of sometimes. Especially since she hadn’t breast feed since she had left the baby with her son.
She slowly climbed into bed. Crawling towards her husband. Placing her hand on his stomach and running her hand downwards, sliding into the sweat pants he was wearing. She stopped as she felt his cock. Damn it seemed so big tonight. Even bigger then normal. She fought it free of his pants filling it with both hands.
“Damn baby.” She whispered. His penis was so engorged tonight, she could fill her pussy moisten just by holding his huge rod. She smiled as she leaned over him and slowly parted her lips kissing the head of his cock lightly. Slowly her lips parted as she playfully suckled the head. Her tongue began to lick at the small opening of the head teasingly. Then around the head coating his throbbing penis head. She pulled it from her mouth as she begins to lick at it with her tongue. Her free hand reached down and began to rub her own nipple as she pinched at it lightly mashing the soft button between her fingers as a few drops of breast milk meet her hand. She began to tug at it sending the sensation of pleasure and pain throughout her body.
She could fill him steer a little as she ran her tongue down his penis to little spot at the bottom of his head where it meets the shaft, teasing it with her tongue. Then down his shaft tracing the thick vein of his cock with her tongue and then she ran it back up. She began to lick back at his head before popping into her mouth slowly sucking on it taking more and more of him into her mouth with each sucking motion. Her own hand was now twisting her dripping nipples. Her clit was throbbing as she rubbed her thighs together. Her panties soaked with her juices.
She had about half of his dick in her mouth when she felt him sit up. She grinned to herself as she reached up slowly with her hand and began to caress his balls. She felt his body shift lightly and the light came on. She looked up to see her son.
“Mom.” Johnny looked down at her with a look of shock on her his face. She quickly pulled his cock from her mouth as she sat up her eyes wide. What had she done she thought.
“Oh crap Johnny.” She said as she looked down at her own naked body quickly covering her naked breast with her arm. Johnny quickly grabbed a pillow covering his own hard cock.
“What are you, why are you in are bed, where is Greg?” She began to fire of questions as she looked away unable to look him in the face after what she had just done.
“I don’t know. I feel asleep watching Jessica.” he said from behind her. She could fill him moving about. No doubt to put his huge cock away. Damn she couldn’t get it out of her mind or what she was just doing to it.
“Shit, Greg is going to kill me.” She hung her head and ran her fingers through her hair taking a deep breath.
“Mom, its okay.” She felt his hands touch her shoulders as it put a sheet over her.
“No its not.” She grabbed the sheet pulling it over her naked body.
“Mom. It was an accident.” He began to rub her shoulder lightly.
“I…” She closed her mouth not knowing what to say and sat there as his strong hands rubbed her shoulders trying to comfort her. But the alcohol made his touch seem more like agony. She wanted to turn around and fuck him. Damn, what was she thinking.
“Mom, I am not going to tell anyone. Why don’t you go to bed.” He said as he rubbed her shoulders one last time as he leaned over toward her and kissed her lightly on the cheek. “Good night mom.” he stood up and exited the room and headed out into the hallway but not before looking back one last time. She saw something in his eyes, at least she thought she had. He closed the door slowly and then he was gone. She sat there for a few seconds. The taste of his cock in her mouth.
Tuesday July 21st 2009
“Oh Shit…” Rebecca sat there with her hand over her mouth. Elizabeth looked down at the cup of coffee she had been nursing while telling her sister what had happened.
“So what did you do afterwards?” Rebecca sat back, a grin playing on her face.
“I went and took a shower,” Elizabeth said.
“And where was Greg at?” Rebecca asked taking one last gulp of her coffee, setting the cup down on the coffee table.
“He fell asleep in his office. Johnny went and woke him up,” Elizabeth said. Luckily she hadn’t had to see him much that night since he had been asleep by the time she got out of the shower.
“So he was right down the hall while you where sucking your son.” Rebecca let out a small laugh as a smile crossed her face.
“Its not funny.” Elizabeth mouth went wide at her sister laughing at her. She set her cup of coffee down on the side table and tossed a throw pillow at her. The baby startled a little from the commotion but not enough to wake up or let go of the teat in her mouth.
“It is a little. Come on sis it was an accident you can’t blame yourself. You where pretty wasted the other day.” Her sister leaned over and rubbed her shoulder.
“That’s not what is bothering me.” Elizabeth let out a deep sigh.
“Then what is it?” Rebecca asked as she rubbed her sisters shoulder lightly.
“Nothing your right.” She faked a smile at her sister.
“Well, I guess I better get going if I am going to go to work. Rebecca leaned over and gave her a kiss on the cheek. “Later slut.” She quickly whispered in her ear.
“Bitch.” She pushed her sister away as they both laughed a little. It felt good to laugh Elizabeth thought to herself.
“So how well hung is he?” Rebecca asked as she stood up.
“What?” She felt caught off guard by her sisters question her face turning a little red.
“How big was his cock?” Rebecca teased as she grinned.
“That’s my son your talking about.” Elizabeth stood up slowly trying not to wake the baby as her sister helped her.
“Come on you said he felt huge. How huge was he?” She stood there grinning as she crossed her arms. Elizabeth knew she was going to bug her until she told.
“I will just say if his dad was hung like that I would have never divorced him.” A smile crossed her face thinking about her ex-husband Frank. He was a real asshole but he was damn good in bed, mostly other peoples. She missed his large cock sometimes. Not that Greg wasn’t well hung. But Johnny put them both to shame.
“That big, Huh?” A small smirk played across Rebecca’s face. She had accidentally walked in on Frank once and had always teased her sister about it.
Elizabeth saw her sister out and headed up stairs to put the baby down who had seemed to have had her fill of milk. She sighed as she took a deep sigh and headed to her sons room. She opened the door slowly peeking in to see him laying on the bed still asleep. He had taken to sleeping in, no doubt enjoying his last summer before he left for collage. She bite her bottom lip as she noticed the bulge within his sweat pants. She wanted to sneak into his room to see it again, She didn’t know why, but she had fantasized about her son ever since that night. She had felt awkward around him though she had managed to hide it. Neither one of them had talked about that night since. She had no idea if he shared the same feelings as she did not that she would or even could ask. She sighed as she slowly she closed the door and decided she needed a nice cold shower.
