Poor Little White Girl

[phantome71]

Please check out my story "Poor Little White Girl", in interracial
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=185536[/FONT]

 

[msboy8]

Please check out my story "Poor Little White Girl", in interracial
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=185536[/FONT]

Hi,
I R.V.'d your story. I liked it but...

2 suggestions:

1. I went from your link and didn't realize the girls were Enlish until I read the description of the story after I read it. I was stationed on an RAF base as an American Serive member in the UK, too. (That was about 15 years agp)

Making the point of the National differences would have made the story hotter! I.E. How did the girls feel about the guys being Americans?

2. I also was a little confused by the ending. I know the next night she did a strip tease for all the guys at their place. That would mean to me that they would have gang-banged her after that. But, the next thing is her going to masturbate in her own bed. If she would have been gang-banged, IMHO, she would have gotten enough sex that night.

Thanks for asking for my comments.

 

[Bloke678]

If she would have been gang-banged, IMHO, she would have gotten enough sex that night.

You'd have thought . Some girls just can't get enough

Nice story, mate.